That breath effect <3 Also very nice detail on the fur!

thanks n.n both were a lot of fun to draw~

Pootis bird will not be happy ^^;

Poot Poot Pootis Poot

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dat maw :v
would totally use as waterslide ~

i would too IF i can get back out the way i went in.

ish the infamous waterslide of doom ouo/

That maw looks, surprisingly comfy

pretty much all maws do x3

lol indeed

Hello darkness my old friend...

hehe x3

Snow, Why are you drawing your birdy self to get nommed, Yeah it doesn't have the crest on the forehead. But we all know the appearance is the same.

The same thought crossed my mind, lol

I'm not very creative with birds yet, but Snowbird has a different design x3

Gotta say the way you've been drawing quads is great. And seeing them improving each time is wonderful

thanks a lot n.n

oh my woofgod ouo

The bird talks?

Soo.... can just all animals in this world talk, or is something special about that bird?

Come to think about it, since just a few seconds ago she could barely stand up or walk in her new body.... how is she able to be accurate enough with moving her new tails to snatch a tiny bird out of the sky?

It was the crest on her forehead that snatched up the bird out of the sky, not the giant fox herself.

the stuff with the talking bird will be explained in a couple bonus pages in between the normal comic pages :3

Yes eat!!!! <3

nuuuu x3

Well, fatality in my books is definitely a bit anxiety-provoking, but it's your story, write what inspires you.

hehe, well thanks for the tolerance n.n
the next pages will still hold some surprises though :p

I'm not a fan of hard vore either. I could tell that this was different from your other pictures though because the inside of her mouth was completely dark when she tried to eat the brother. A black void that you're not going to escape from. In all your other pictures, as far as I can remember, the back of the mouth was well lit and I think that detail implied that there was no real danger in being eaten, just something the pred is doing for fun or there is no serious danger in the context.

The darkness though, I can tell that whoever she eats isn't coming back and it's the main reason I was worried about the brother in the previous pages. I do feel bad for the bird, but the character the way that she is right now IS going to eat someone and it may as well be a Bird for now though I'm sure the bird is just the start and humanoids will be in the menu soon enough. I'm wondering what her reaction is going to be when she notices and doesn't simply just forget when the symbol on her head lights up. Or, she notices people she talks to keep disappearing. *shrugs*

the stuff with the black maw-insides is true, but it's also because of the switch to the manga-style, it just looks.. cool, I think x3;
Buuuut yeah I'll figure everything out as the comic continues n.n

That last panel. Very intimidating!

Ish the dark void of noms and more noms x3

Dayum, this looks awesome!

thanks a lot n.n ~

O/////O;

ish big blushface ouo

I feel like an example needs to be made of someone actually getting eaten and dying or you'll never get across the feeling of an actual threat. Like in the very beginning when Schwarzpelz eats Celia, it's written that if you lose, you don't get a second chance. Because you die. But so far, only Celia has been eaten and she just got freed not long after. Granted this has only really gotten so far, like how much can you possibly shove into just one chapter? Especially when it was just the prologue before. But another thing for me personally is knowing you and your usual content, I can't help but feel like the eating is just for fun and no one actually gets hurt. So you know, to get across that getting eaten is an actual danger, there really needs to be an example of someone getting eaten and killed. Even Schwarzpelz himself doesn't seem that intimidating because you can just ask to be let out. Assuming you're still conscious, he'd probably say no or just ignore you. But still, the prologue sort of made the idea of being eaten by one of the beasts seem like more of a game or a joke than anything actually serious.

I'm suddenly wondering... what if Celia actually won? What the hell would she have wished for? A mini Schwarzi that she can wear on her head like a hat? I want one of those...

Welllll... I agree with most of what you are saying. I'm still very unsure about how much of a feeling of danger and threat I want to create in these pages, and as you said, usually the noms I draw are non-lethal and pretty friendly even. I could say what I think I should do NOW, but knowing me, it'll all be different in a week already x3 For now, whatever atmosphere gets created in these pages is just what we're stuck with for now xd

BUT.. you do know that Celia was a very, very special case in terms of "hey, let me out again!", right? :p

Oh yeah, main character magic! OwO

What an inviting maw. *hops in*

nuuu ish dangerous x3

I don't really care. *looks down throat*

welp, there goes that innocence

awww she's still completely cute and stuff OuOb

cute, but i don't fancy getting eaten for trying to give pets :P

Tell me there will be a burp with some feathers that she will try to play off XD

hmmmm.. nope x3
cute idea though~

O-Ok. Honestly I'm addicted. This tongue looks gorgeous. D:

hehe, thanks x3
lots more tongues to come in the future ouo/

>//>

that last panel is too good

Also reallly like how you did the fluff in those two close-ups

thanks n.n the fluff was fun to do x3 ... kinda a lot of work though D:

As long as full-on graphic digestion isn't shown and it's more implied that they will not be escaping, I'd say it would still seemquite tasteful (pun not intended). A prey or two need to be made an example of to perhaps instill that fear into other characters.
Also the less development, the better in terms of prey. Getting attached to a character only to see them die in such a simple and quick way can be disappointing.

hmmmm yeah that's pretty much what I've been thinking. In future pages I'll maybe draw some implied fatal vore, where the prey doesn't even get a chance to talk or something so noone gets attached to it.

~Very very very seriously!!!

Aw man all these amazing views XD I like the first one with glitery stars in the back ground ^^

thanks n.n
but to be quite honest.. .there were stars in the background all the time so far :p

I know, but this one is very good positioning XD

das sieht toll aus ich mag den blick auf das maul

wobei so wie du das aus atmen gezeichnet hast sagt es mir das der atem nicht wirklich bereuschend sein kann von ihr.

nur der vogel ist ja wirklich nur ein kleiner happen ....

ich weiß nicht wenn ich hübscher finde Schwarzpelz oder Sie ...... ich mage irgend wie beide ...und Snowball ^^'

hehe x3 ja der vogel sollte schon klein sein im vergleich zu ihr.

Wow, what a great view! I love that last panel especially.

In regards to mortality... I'm not a fan of it, especially not with victims who have been "established" in some way, though when it's tactfully done - the victim's death isn't drawn-out needlessly, nothing more than what is needed to progress the story - it can be alright. I'm personally very, very wary of death in stories that serves no purpose besides showing that death can happen. I've had bad experiences in the past with writers including sudden death scenes for characters with the aim of "setting the tone", it often ends up adding little to the story besides the shock value, and can even sour the whole experience.

Of course, that's more of a personal issue for me, not everyone would share the same opinion of it. I only want to stress trying being tactful about it if you're going to take a route like that, be mindful of the mood you want to set.

yeah I'm still very, very unsure about everything myself x3
I DO want to have some sense of threat and danger in these pages, on the other hand I don't wanna get too much into it and ruin the mood..
got a couple ideas for the future but now idea what exactly to do yet x3

It's a tricky subject! Especially in regards to vore stories, too. There's all manner of "rules" on how to and how not to write death in stories, and half of those rules sorta go at-odds to the usual goals of vore and other such subjects, so keeping it tactful is extra-difficult. And some people won't be bothered by the level of tact either, if the scene is exciting enough. Kinda depends on their level of comfort or disconnect with the subject, and personal preferences in other things.

I like big fluffy wolf *hugs*

is a fox though ouob but thanks n.n

Oh, FLUFFY FOX, EVEN CUTIER *hugs more*

That...might actually be one of the best looking mouths I've seen in this gallery of yours. And of course that's saying a lot. It's got this weird mixture of looking enticing and yet being very unsettling, and I love it.

hehe, thanks n.n
yeah the maws in manga-style are looking kinda cool, they're fun to draw too n.n

*Shivers* ...I know how the little bird feels. even though you are small to inhale you are still a snack to be eaten x-x

the smaller they are, the more fun it is OuO/

You be one of my favorite artists <3

aww thanks a lot n.n ~

Floofy muzzle!!!

better than a.. moofy fluzzle ouo
... *goes away* ...

Those teeth... they're hypnotic...

they learned it in hypnotizing-school for many years ouo

"why grandmother what big teeth you have"
and such beautiful teeth they are. to be honest, i envy you snow cause you can draw characters big on a piece of paper while i can only draw characters as big as the foxes nose in panel 3 with out loosing detail (using the picture above as an example) but i'll try to get better.

P.S. i still love the story so far

thanks a lot n.n
and just keep practicing~ it's all a matter of how much time you put into it~

your welcome! :-3