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I've touched on transformation and growth themes before, but monsters were something I mostly stayed away from...until Deertai came along and commissioned this story from me!
In it, Tai is our protagonist, and one who seems to be in great distress when we join him. His stomach is twisted, his body is in pain and the world around him is changing in weird ways, but he can't put his finger on what's happening until the ground starts moving away from his face...he isn't flying; he's just getting bigger, as worried citizens flee from the area. His antlers turn jagged, his teeth grow into terrible, deadly fangs, and his hooves splinter into weapons as he makes his way for downtown, but why he's headed there, no one can be sure! The only thing that's sure is that no one is safe.
As always, read, comment and enjoy!
In it, Tai is our protagonist, and one who seems to be in great distress when we join him. His stomach is twisted, his body is in pain and the world around him is changing in weird ways, but he can't put his finger on what's happening until the ground starts moving away from his face...he isn't flying; he's just getting bigger, as worried citizens flee from the area. His antlers turn jagged, his teeth grow into terrible, deadly fangs, and his hooves splinter into weapons as he makes his way for downtown, but why he's headed there, no one can be sure! The only thing that's sure is that no one is safe.
As always, read, comment and enjoy!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 12.3 kB
"...claw that jutted out from the middle and carved up the roadways as easily as an electric knife through tender meat, and his tail, despite being a small, lifted tuft, still swung with enough force to create small gusts of wind behind him."
Dope description. The child and his "scawy monstah" comment is a cute comic relief.
Ah, and I love the mocha ending, haha.
Gotta love hunky, hulkin' monsters...
Dope description. The child and his "scawy monstah" comment is a cute comic relief.
Ah, and I love the mocha ending, haha.
Gotta love hunky, hulkin' monsters...
Thanks a bunch! I'll admit, I've been working on including more similes and making them a bit more realistic and easier to understand. These ones worked fairly well, it seems.
Monsters are apparently a popular theme that I've stayed fairly far away from, but perhaps I'll give them another look!
Monsters are apparently a popular theme that I've stayed fairly far away from, but perhaps I'll give them another look!
Ya know, monsters are the macros of a wild, wicked imagination. I'm sure I'm missing an ingredient there, but... hm. I think you could get around power-play in micro/macro, the same way an owner of a pet could, but monsters are inherently powerful... Just me thinking out loud.
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