Awwwww :c poor little guy

Little guy, little cry.

even the cold hearted and togh guys like FInnik have feelings~

YOU KISS ME TOMORRAH, ILL BITE YO FACE OFF. Ciao.

You can bite my face off I don't care...! You're crying and I feel badfor you Finnick...

Aw

O-oh my.... I wanna hug the little guy :( and make him feel good.

awww poor Finnick :'(

Damn don't you hate it when you get something in your eye? Makes you want to cry.

Got a Patreon notification on my phone for your new update the second I opened this xD

That's a big twist...and you managed to get the emotional response...poor little finnick, he needs a wolf hug!

Please hug him

That or Kronk x3

Eddie Murphy

Come give yo Aunt Bunny a kiss.

good job nick you made the cub in him come out

AAAUGH SETH MY HEART

uncontrollable weeping good GOD

omg he needs a hug stat!

Think you should have tried with some different cameras angle. Maybe a comic writer (that I'm not) could help you in this :)

Also try imaging him cry with his low deep voice his kind of funy (sorry :P)

You should of done one of the panels where he's looking away holding his arm and his tears are starting to work up like in all those animoos

Thank God I really dident want him puting that on...

I'd say your main issue is you're still struggling with 'flow of motion' in your comics. It does looks like the characters are frozen in mid-time poses rather than appearing to be visually IN motion as they speak. The word "SHOVE" and the action lines on Finnick help, but we're missing the blurred motion of Nick's arm to actually IMPACT against him. We're only seeing the reaction, without any visual action.

The quality is there, just not the movement. Fixing that would likely erase a huge amount of the discomfort you had with this page.

For what it's worth I'm kinda digging how that very thing gives it a 'real' 'photographic' quality. Like looking at frames from a film instead of 'comic-ifying' the characters.

:C is hard living in a truck

DDD:

*demon thinks past trauma is coming into place*

going from sexy to goofy to tears at the speed of my unexpected feels...

NO BABY DONT CRY

Awwwwwww....

I think you did really good with the emotion you gave it! :)

Poor little finnick!

Bawwwww!

Awww my feels!

It hurts seeing him cry.

Aww see he's sensitive like a girly boy I feel bad for him :(

A-Aww... Finnick is simply a cutie girl under his tough exterior...

I feel like he's playing nick..... Maybe not lol. He's a great actor if so XD

Honestly, the slight tearing up on Nick in the last panel is what sells the emotion for me. Great job!

;-;

THE FEEL :'(

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ;W;

hugs

Cute~

No, no, no, noooo! Finnick, don't cry, cutie... *hugs him*

Am I the only one to think that this isn't cute but actually hella weird to see a grown ass guy cry after getting shoved?

Some guys irl are actually that sensitive so no not at all werid

I'm with you Duke, But I love the art work.

It's not really coz he got shoved, more like Nick pushed the right buttons and upset him. With how he acts like such a tough guy, it's probably all those repressed feelings hitting him at once.

Indeed. It's pretty obvious he's not crying for being shoved, but for some repressed feelings.

Well i felt the feels

It's hard to picture Finnick crying since he has such a Deep voice and so mean xD

I seriously laughed when he talked the first time because of how deep his voice was.

SAME LOL xD I was like what even!! Deep ass voice for a little guy

Nick seems here like he's gonna cry because Finnick is crying! :(

I get what you were trying to go for, Fennick is that tough guy that wants to just be pretty, he's stuck

Damn, poor fella.

Acting tough, still a little bitch inside :3

Damn Nick! You gonna knee him in the nuts too?

It would've been more emotional had you skipped the actual punch panels, you made the comic go from teasing/comedy into 'toony violence' into 'realistic dialogue' into attempt at emotion; had you just gone from the teasing into Finnick slowly stopping to fight and instead changed into a slow 'I give up' sob I think it would've felt like more authentic frustration.

That's my take on it anyways. o:~

But if you cry, I cry!

OH MY GOD I THOUGHT HE WAS LAUGHING IN THE WIP ON PATREON.
NO PLEASE DONT CRY

precious BB

Oh man...

I came here to fap, not to feel.

Love how Nick is starting to tear up as well seeing him cry ~

Shiiiit.....

Awww he needs a hug

Aw noo don't cry D:

. . . Is it heartless of me to think that this is a trap? >w<;

I literally had tears In my eyes, the poor lil cutie getting hurt like that

I'm sadness :')))))))

Next

Awe, poor little guy :/ so fixated on his personal image. It's tough!

Awwwww ... I need to hug him q_q that is soo sad *hugs*

awww

imagining this with Finnick's voice... PFFF I can't stop chuckling

aww, poor lil guy, just wanna hug him D:

Poor baby boy!

Big guys can cry too.

oh no D: the lil badass is crying D: owww, nick should be sorry right now D=<

;w;

Finnick please do not cry

I'm not sure why he crying.
Nick hit him on the sternum?
(Or generally in the chest).

Can it went about the situation with this outfit?

I honestly do not understand that.

Finnick's so cute. I love where this is going ... at least if it is going where I hope it is going. :P

That was probably his little sister's dress. WHo's dead now.

Or, his daddy used to make him dress up in that thing. But if that was true, why would he keep it?

Woahhh things got too real.

Man my feels!

He broke him

drawing is awesome, but it doesn't match the characters, except for nick.

Wow! They are just so adorable.

I was not prepared for these feels

*whimps* don't stop now, I want to read more.

I don't get it

You still gotta remember...

That's Tiny Lister's voice coming from that little thing. TwT

I hope this will get continued!!!! This is by far the best zootopia comic out there!

I'd say that the "emotion" would've worked better if Finnick had put his head down, instead of putting his head up. Having Nick slump with him while doing that may have worked out better.

Overall, really enjoying the comic!

Enjoying the comic, but kinda interested in seeing more. Any word on when the next installments will be up?

Man, this hit far closer to home than I expected ;.;

Poor Fin!

... this page becomes more amusing when you remember how deep Finnick's voice actually is

I don't know why but I am listening to Chris Isaak's Wicked Game while reading this and it fits very well.

Aw, who wouldn't feel bad for Finnick right now.