*squeaks and smiles* This came out awesome.

I love the interplay between all of the characters, and the komodo dragon is a wonderful creation, who I hope we see more of in the future. ^_^
Of course, I'd also like to see more of those weasels. A lot of antics and hijinks could easily abound with that trio. :)

What I love the most about this story, is how the transformation itself is secondary to the fate the komodo has for his victims.
While the transformation is done beautifully and certainly a fate fitting of Rodent, that fate leaves you imagining that many different types of transformations could be done to result in the same ending.
Definitely a wonderful case of the ends, justifying the means. ;)

Thanks again so much for taking this story commission and doing such a fantastic job with it.

*Grins* Really glad you enjoyed the story Prowler, I have to admit, I was looking forward to writing this sort of story for you ever since I opened myself up for commissions. I was always a huge fan of the art and stories you had commissioned, and when you said you were interested, I thought I might of have an idea of one of the tales you might have asked for. I'm just glad that I was able to do justice for this story and make it worth it for you. :)

If you ever have any idea, even if they aren't commissions, send them my way, who knows, I might need some inspiration one day for a fun little story.

Never read a story with that kind of transformation before. While I read the other smoke tf and absorbtion stories, I kind of expected this one to go in about the same direction. So it was quite a surprise that it was quite a different approach.
And ofcourse, not only the transformation, but everything has been really well written.

Thanks for the kind words Ximeon, and I'm glad I can mix it up a bit and surprise you. Anything really stand out from this tale that you really enjoyed?

You're welcome ofcourse. Hard to pick anything specific really, but I think what stood out the most for me was that little side plot of the other characters that lead to Rodent's situation in the first place. It was an interesting little thing in my opinion, especialy cause it wasn't all just Rodent's fault, that he ended up the way he did. So really mostly enjoyed the characters.

A surprisingly sexy idea.

Thank you very much, glad to hear you enjoyed it.

I'd kinda like to be transformed into a cigar, myself. It sounds like a fun way to go.

enjoyed this one. Smoking is bad for you. Not fan of smoking but this rate could not make it sound any more fun. Lots of degradation here. The making of some nice story. I can see in the older stories the build up of kinks and wronging skills.

Not saying you did not improve but there is a charm in the older stories. This one felt less creepy and more cruel. I don't really hate the dragon as much. Maybe its because in the older stories a lot of the TFs seem less brutal or less increasingly deadly. Its seems a lot of other TFs later in your work reduce people to nothing. This one seems more like a transformation. With the mind sort of still there. I do like the making them into smoke servants.

I imagine this was a one way trip. Makes me wounder how much smoke can a dragon inhale?