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I HIGHLY ADVISE LOOKING AT THIS PIC "BEFORE" READING THE POEM: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1934039
This picture was drawn by the brilliant
Anhes. Please do stop by his page; his art is BREATHTAKING! =O
Anyhoo, this poem was COMPLETELY inspired by this particular piece of art. Its relevance to the poem is practically 100%! I am truly grateful to Anhes for drawing something so beautiful and filled with such fervent passion. I hope this poem of mine is doing it justice! (T-T)
The poem is short, but I believe its length is JUST right. I didn't want to draw it out; it was meant to be short, simple, and dare I say...SWEET! =P
Enjoy everyone! ^^
Until next poem! ;3
This picture was drawn by the brilliant
Anhes. Please do stop by his page; his art is BREATHTAKING! =OAnyhoo, this poem was COMPLETELY inspired by this particular piece of art. Its relevance to the poem is practically 100%! I am truly grateful to
Anhes for drawing something so beautiful and filled with such fervent passion. I hope this poem of mine is doing it justice! (T-T)The poem is short, but I believe its length is JUST right. I didn't want to draw it out; it was meant to be short, simple, and dare I say...SWEET! =P
Enjoy everyone! ^^
Until next poem! ;3
Category Poetry / Human
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 80 x 120px
File Size 738 B
It's really beautiful, I can not believe I was able to inspire so much beauty.
I appreciate your deference infinitely and assure you that your poem is much more beautiful than the picture that inspired it. You are truly amazing. Your words bring to me wonderful thoughts of beautiful sunny days, full of warm colors of love and delicious fragrances, is truly magical.
Of course I will mount in a journal, so more people will can read it, thank you very much for this wonderful surprise
I appreciate your deference infinitely and assure you that your poem is much more beautiful than the picture that inspired it. You are truly amazing. Your words bring to me wonderful thoughts of beautiful sunny days, full of warm colors of love and delicious fragrances, is truly magical.
Of course I will mount in a journal, so more people will can read it, thank you very much for this wonderful surprise
OH GAWSH!! (o.O)
*is EXTREMELY flattered*
I really wasn't expecting such a response. I'm GREATLY appreciative of your comment! =O
Writing is a passion of mind; making others think about anything and everything is what I feel I specialize in. My words come from deep within myself and are often formulated with the help of visuals. In this case, YOUR wonderful bunny lovers! x3
I hope my future poems continue to stir the mind, body, and soul (in a good way of course)! ;3
*is EXTREMELY flattered*
I really wasn't expecting such a response. I'm GREATLY appreciative of your comment! =O
Writing is a passion of mind; making others think about anything and everything is what I feel I specialize in. My words come from deep within myself and are often formulated with the help of visuals. In this case, YOUR wonderful bunny lovers! x3
I hope my future poems continue to stir the mind, body, and soul (in a good way of course)! ;3
My god, this is one of your unique poems!! This is a rare rare find.... I'm super amazed at how well you did this without using any set meter... and the repetition and wonderful choice of words (like hung from flourished citric tree.) struck me! I adore what you've done with this O.O The style is just.... i can't place the words... but it's brilliant!! BRILLIANT! O___O
7 reads and counting xd
7 reads and counting xd
Well, I'm very happy that you think so highly of this piece! =P
The repetition is new for me, but I think it worked out pretty well, especially with the word I was repeating! ;3
"Sun-sweet" DEFINES the poem quite well, IF you know what it represents! =D
Luckily, Anhes's picture is capable of clearing the fog (if any arouses)! ;D
Thanks again my poetic furiend! ^^
The repetition is new for me, but I think it worked out pretty well, especially with the word I was repeating! ;3
"Sun-sweet" DEFINES the poem quite well, IF you know what it represents! =D
Luckily,
Anhes's picture is capable of clearing the fog (if any arouses)! ;D Thanks again my poetic furiend! ^^
It was enjoyable, but the reference to 'caramel' although in relation to the sun, doesn't fit well with the previous metaphor of sun-sweet(orange) to the characters in love...Tangy, Marmalade, Zesty, well, I'm not sure how you are pronouncing caramel (kar-mal, or care-a-mel) but as I said the other night, I've never eaten a caramel orange, now if it were apples used to represent the characters or chocolate, but not oranges...I just don't see it. It's still good, and still works, it just could be better suited with a different word.
(NOTE) *Please do not ask me to read things late at night...I am very sensitive and moody after 11 EST. Don't know why, but it seems to be around that time that I flip out over things. Thanks Tally ^.^*
(NOTE) *Please do not ask me to read things late at night...I am very sensitive and moody after 11 EST. Don't know why, but it seems to be around that time that I flip out over things. Thanks Tally ^.^*
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