Mawshot commission for rufran

This is the mawshot that was on hold for so long that made me start hating it, especially ever since I noticed Lone looks like a damn cyclops, and a friend pointed the tongues I draw are too fleshy and thin looking, I agree now, but one thing I improved is showing the throat more.. so the character doesn't look like it's choking on their own tongue.. though, I need to show the throat more, it looks a bit too high up, gonna research on that. ALSO, I have improved how I draw teeth recently, so that's another thing

Either way, the commissioner liked the final piece, and my shading improved a tiny bit, I think, but I gotta find a way to make my shading process more efficient since it's sort of a mess, gotta learn how to organize my layers when painting using this grayscale-first technique

This was gonna be the best mawshot I've done at the time, and it probably is a huge improvement to my previous one, but I know I can do something incredibly better now



Art and Lone © Jean C Rivera
Rufran the Kobold ©  rufran