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Whee part 4, this story following the young Kituss, a better look at what motivates him and a little bit about his history. A tad more bland than the others, but its more of a tie in moment than anything.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 6.2 kB
very confusing because there is so little connectivity and very choppy sentences. also, the beginning was funny, like a little break in a serious story or play that actual writers use. try to make things connect and have details that will less confuse the reader, as this sometimes discourages readers from wanting to read more.
Ever the missing connectivity, I played it out that way on purpose. Every bit of it is meant to be confusing, in a sense. I like the idea of the person reading being lost, because that's just how they need to feel for now. That, and when I first verbally told this part, I was still trying to find some background on him to begin with.. so yeah, it goes out there.
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