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Well, this has to UNDOUBTEDLY be the fastest I've ever written a poem, especially since I JUST posted "Dream-Tip" yesterday! xD
Anyhoo, just a splash of random inspiration behind this one. My mind is SUCH a mystery, but oh does it do me good! =3
Quickie Notes:
1.) This poem plays with homophones, as did my "(K)night Into Dreams." The two words that I played with here are VERY crucial to understanding AND feeling the FULL depth and emotion of this piece! =O
2.) It's got a smidgen of love in it. (just a smidgen) lol
3.) May the conflict in Iraq end SOON! ^^
ENJOY, and please tell me what you think of this one! I was rather excited while working on it! =D
Until next poem! ;3
Anyhoo, just a splash of random inspiration behind this one. My mind is SUCH a mystery, but oh does it do me good! =3
Quickie Notes:
1.) This poem plays with homophones, as did my "(K)night Into Dreams." The two words that I played with here are VERY crucial to understanding AND feeling the FULL depth and emotion of this piece! =O
2.) It's got a smidgen of love in it. (just a smidgen) lol
3.) May the conflict in Iraq end SOON! ^^
ENJOY, and please tell me what you think of this one! I was rather excited while working on it! =D
Until next poem! ;3
Category Poetry / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 840 B
Quite darker than your usual stuff heehee, I like X3
There is one thing that I'm not sure I quite understood though: "Turned toward the ground, his weary eyes/ met face to face with carnal pools./ Reflections of his dearest love/ came forth, despite surroundings cruel.
A single drop of sorrow fell/ which caused her ripples to depart."
So then, is he looking into a pool of blood at his reflection, and a tear or drop of blood falls causing it to scatter in ripples? Meaning that he is his dearest love (Narcissy comes to mind)? Or was that unintentional? X3
There is one thing that I'm not sure I quite understood though: "Turned toward the ground, his weary eyes/ met face to face with carnal pools./ Reflections of his dearest love/ came forth, despite surroundings cruel.
A single drop of sorrow fell/ which caused her ripples to depart."
So then, is he looking into a pool of blood at his reflection, and a tear or drop of blood falls causing it to scatter in ripples? Meaning that he is his dearest love (Narcissy comes to mind)? Or was that unintentional? X3
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