This is intriguing. It's difficult to follow with my eyes, like I can't fully figure it out, but it's in a really good way. It's a sense of mystery it has about it, or like a close description of those times a creature is described like a mess. When you read it on paper it just sounds lazy to me because it's just another way of saying "you can't imagine it", but this does feel like it could be described like that and it would be accurate and material. I really like it.

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