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Written for onissarle's Halloween contest of a horror-themed story in 50-100 words.
DISCLAIMER: This is an offshoot and I wanted to use my characters to help inspire the writing, and this is something which definitely wouldn't happen normally between my characters.
Feel free to let me know your thoughts on the piece in comments, of course!
DISCLAIMER: This is an offshoot and I wanted to use my characters to help inspire the writing, and this is something which definitely wouldn't happen normally between my characters.
Feel free to let me know your thoughts on the piece in comments, of course!
Category Story / Abstract
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 628 B
A suggestion: In such a short piece, it's worth omitting any character names and descriptions that are not essential to the story; "cook", "captain", "she", "he".. that's all is needed.
Just moving the spoken line two sentences up would make it possible to condense these two sentences down to just six words.
Just moving the spoken line two sentences up would make it possible to condense these two sentences down to just six words.
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