AWESOME, you have a Green in there. I can't wait to see the rest.

And white and red and brown! There should be a blue one too! :P

Blue? In a combat situation? Hrm, I think not.

And WHITE in a combat situation? :P I think they would first blow off the enemy and think about camouflage later XP

It isn't about camo. Everyone knows Blues are wusses.

I didn't know that! Well maybe... but all dragons are hot and good fuckbuddies

fuckbuddies?

yes.. friends that you fuck with ;)

I should look into that...

LOL! the grammar made me lol! Great stuff! XD

Sorry my English isn't perfect :P

You're trying, that's fine

Ah its okay. If you need someone to edit it for you just note me.

I still enjoyed it and am looking forward to the following pages for the explanation of this awesome drama! XD

=p

Your english may not be perfect, but it is still readable. Hell, its better than half the things I've read by people that actually LIVE in the states!

agreed!

It's good enough, I don't really notice.

Great comic so far, but <winces> the grammar is a little ripe in places.
"An unknown number of terrorists" Or "A group of terrorists, size unknown" would have made more sense at the start of that breifing.
Information is like sheep, that is you never need to put an S on the end no matter how many there are.
I think you meant intercepting not interfering the information leaking from the facility. And past tense of give is Gave not gived.
Anyhow, great comic, but you could use a proof reader.

Not bad grammar for someone who's first language isn't English.

I like this comic!

Minigun isn't really good weapon for CQB. Maybe it looks scary, but one person with Smg or shotgun will propably win :P . It would be perfect to cover entrances or windows, but storming a building with minigun? Not a good idea. But comic is still great though. Sorry for my picking on, I'm pretty much realism whore :P

:praisethesteel:-t nem ártana nyaggatnod a nyelvtani korrektúrák miatt legalább. a Gived az tényleg eléggé szemet szúró volt, már ne haragudj. Sok sikert a továbbiakban.
-végülis... valahol el kell kezdeni. ez oké.

* praisethesteel

Dig the mask. However, there weapons seem a bit too black, and all blending into the armour. Good stuff though..

my head hurt after busnis. perhaps someone can help you proofread in the future if needed for an english translation?

Not bad

You seriously could use a person who checks the grammar for any mistakes. This also could be turning out to be one of the most cheesiest comics I have read this far, which might not be a bad thing really in this case. Anyways, keep it up.

four dragons + weapons = destruction

Cool armour.. can I have one ? :O

its like gears of war...but with dragons!!