Here's the sneak-peek at Page Two. Still has ugly humans. I drew it a couple of months ago, and have improved since.

Still, if I take the time to redraw every page that doesn't meet my admittedly not-that-high standards, I'll never get the comic out, and it'll be yet another woulda-coulda-shoulda in my list.

No dialogue or color here - it's in a text file waiting to be pasted in.