Very interesting. Maybe... a bit of horror. Now, this could be read in many ways, but at least one rather unsettling idea came to my mind: Are we all narrated? Well written, simple and short, and still able to tell such a strong little story. Very good job, I enjoyed reading this.

Thanks very much. The Narrator idea is something I've been running with for a while now, it fitted quite well with this weeks prompt.

Hmmm. RAther Good, horror and all considered. ^^ Good job.

thanks very much. I was going for creepy rather than proper horror.

Hmm. The character of the Narrator is an interestring one - but you're only giving a peek at him and his importance. I don't really see the horror, here, but I also don't see much else either - this small bit doesn't seem to lead anywhere or say anything in the larger sense of a story or theme just yet, though it certainly holds promise.

Thanks. I think all my prompts will follow your comment in a way. Short things. this is an abstract for what will be a much longer piece in the future, which I have started writing half a dozen times in various forms. I'm glad you think it has promise though.

Thanks dude. and yeah, he is yet another Death embodiment.

A very interesting snippet. It held my attention, and I think I said this on your last prompt, but your prose has a very ephemeral, poetic quality to it that I enjoy reading, although I don't know how well it would work in a longer piece.

There were a couple of little typos and things, but only one thing stuck out as problematic: "Only the Narrator walked the boards and knew their every sound" seems a little ambiguous. Although it is certainly true that he could indeed be the only one that knew every sound, it seems to me at least that everybody else is still walking on them.

All in all, I thought it was great. Really poetic and with a neat, dark edge.

Thanks very much. I like to like the style works well in longer pieces, but I'mm not doing something big for a prompt in the near future, that takes serious time and energy. I'm saving that up for Nanowrimo

Brave. Very brave. I always end up forgetting about Nanowrimo for some reason...

Dude you gotta do it! I've done 2 now (both completed) but wow it's draining. Nano gives a reason the rest of november after the 5th.
So yeah, i'm just using the TP's to keep me in shape so to speak.

When does it start again? I'm going to be brave, shashadistan, I'm going to be brave.

Yay! Nano starts in november, so you've got time to think up a decent plot and do a sketchy outline to work from. Feel free to call me Sasha, or Sil