"a firefly upon my outstretched finger
illuminating all I once found meager
in the pencil-tip shade of melancholy"
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So, the last few days, I feel like I've turned a corner. The semester is coming to a close, I find myself growing accustomed to this condition that seems more and more permanent that I once thought, and I just overall feel "better". Now, where this road goes from here, I cannot say, but for now it leads through the sunlight, rather than shade.
This piece is... interesting, if a little convoluted. It's left intentionally without punctuation in the middle, because I hoped people might read it in a myriad of different ways. Where one thought ends, and another begins, is almost entirely up to you. My mind flows like this sometimes, especially at night or when things grow still, transitioning seamlessly along threads until I end up somewhere I find hard to trace back. Hopefully I emulated that concept well enough here.
Thanks for reading. As always, comments/critique welcome. I'm starting to get the feeling back for this, and with a few unfinished pieces waiting in the eaves, I expect to get my legs back under me once classes are out, and make a final push before year's end. 'Til then.
illuminating all I once found meager
in the pencil-tip shade of melancholy"
---
So, the last few days, I feel like I've turned a corner. The semester is coming to a close, I find myself growing accustomed to this condition that seems more and more permanent that I once thought, and I just overall feel "better". Now, where this road goes from here, I cannot say, but for now it leads through the sunlight, rather than shade.
This piece is... interesting, if a little convoluted. It's left intentionally without punctuation in the middle, because I hoped people might read it in a myriad of different ways. Where one thought ends, and another begins, is almost entirely up to you. My mind flows like this sometimes, especially at night or when things grow still, transitioning seamlessly along threads until I end up somewhere I find hard to trace back. Hopefully I emulated that concept well enough here.
Thanks for reading. As always, comments/critique welcome. I'm starting to get the feeling back for this, and with a few unfinished pieces waiting in the eaves, I expect to get my legs back under me once classes are out, and make a final push before year's end. 'Til then.
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These last two weeks have been crazy for me as well. I hope things have calmed down for you by now, sorry that I've only just found the time to reply.
First off, congrats on graduating. I almost said hopefully there, but I'm sure you pulled it off. It can never just be easy down the stretch though, can it?
And thanks for the feedback, a rare treat for me these days. You're right that something is off with that first bit, as well as some other wordings here and there. It definitely needs another pass across the editor's desk.
Hope the holidays treat you to some well-earned rest, Tempest.
First off, congrats on graduating. I almost said hopefully there, but I'm sure you pulled it off. It can never just be easy down the stretch though, can it?
And thanks for the feedback, a rare treat for me these days. You're right that something is off with that first bit, as well as some other wordings here and there. It definitely needs another pass across the editor's desk.
Hope the holidays treat you to some well-earned rest, Tempest.
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