Her head doesn't move with the breathing...

That's intentional, I wasn't sure whether or not to make his head move too much.

Not too much, no, but it should still move...I think.

Not bad for being rusty.

Interesting. Though I have no practicle advice, as I ain't an expert spriter. :/ Best of luck with any refinements you do to this.

hmg, the legs need to not move so much, but for such a lithe character it's one of those things. the head is really the big distraction. animate part of it besides the eyes. or have the eyes blink every 2 breath cycles instead of every 1. makes it look less like it's blinking nonestop.

also i'd only move the arm down 1 pixel if it's going to move. not 3. way too much energy in the shoulders for a breathing animation

Thanks, I'll probably edit it some more later.

no problem, i didnt wanna sound like some dickhead. but its this one animation people pay attention to. most others are in quick transition, such as running/jumping

and i'm asuming thats what your doing with these..

This is for an adventure game. There's no jump and running here.

Interesting :3

I dunno how much verbal advice I can give, but the back thigh looks like a chunk is getting cut out, and the front knee looks like it's growing a tumor in the 'final frame'
um, my suggestion is to use the first frame as reference, and copy it into the second frame, then make minor edits, and so on. it can be time consuming, but it looks GREAT when you get it finished :3

other than that, it's pretty cool~

Her legs look like they would be going from regular standing position to "I gotta take a piss, yo." Might be a graphical glitch, but geez homie.

Also, the way her arm is moving, it doesn't seem appropriate for the motion unless the entire body is moving up and down to the breathin' beat, dawg.

If you were going for the heavy breathing idea, then you would have to make the stomach and head move more, otherwise it's too stiff for that, man.

There you go, broken bits of suggestions, G.
I hope those last words in each sentence throws you off, peace nigga whaaaaat?