While exploring the Lunar City Museum, John and Sunkit come across the old dinosaur exhibit which just happens to be missing a few exhibits. Will our hero's be able to escape the hall, or will the exhibit be adding two more fossils to it's collection?
Hey there everyone, sorry for the silence on stories. Finals and real life decided to rear their ugly heads and ate up almost all of my free time. This little tale is a story I wrote during my streams a few weeks back for some of my followers. Hope you two enjoy it, and thanks so much for coming to my weekly streams. As always everyone, please, read and enjoy, and feel free to leave a comment, I do love talking with all of you.
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Hey there everyone, sorry for the silence on stories. Finals and real life decided to rear their ugly heads and ate up almost all of my free time. This little tale is a story I wrote during my streams a few weeks back for some of my followers. Hope you two enjoy it, and thanks so much for coming to my weekly streams. As always everyone, please, read and enjoy, and feel free to leave a comment, I do love talking with all of you.
If anyone is interested in seeing their own characters in one of my stories, you can send me a PM asking for a commission, come to one of my streams to have a chance of being included in one of the stories I write, or support me on patreon, where I offer quite a fun fun little rewards for all of the support.
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Inanimate TFs kills furs and people, you know.
i'm more to the realistic side, not much to the surreal.
also.
[points a laser cannon in the lunar academy]
this place is full of injustice.
but since i may get blocked by harassing, then nevermind.
[puts away cannon]
but remember what i said. (you will not, i know what you think)
it kills.
i'm more to the realistic side, not much to the surreal.
also.
[points a laser cannon in the lunar academy]
this place is full of injustice.
but since i may get blocked by harassing, then nevermind.
[puts away cannon]
but remember what i said. (you will not, i know what you think)
it kills.
It depends on if it's permanent or not, if it's permanent than I can agree with you, it's losing the life of the individual. Even then, sometimes the mind survives. At the end of the day, it's fantasy and it isn't harming you. There are fetishes and interests that I don't like or don't understand, but they don't hurt me, and I generally ignore any submissions with those things. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, but there's no need to put down something just because you don't agree with it or don't like it.
To each their own, you know?
To each their own, you know?
Hm, oh yeah, a little idea, maybe for your next petrification story, maybe you can focus it on freezing, like pretty much being frozen solid into an ice sculpture. I haven't really seen any petri-tfs that involve freezing that much, though it's your choice if you wanna try a story like this. ^^
Hah. I love it. Definitely the type of fate I prefer in TFs.
You did a fantastic job with the transformations themselves, with your descriptions and tempo beautifully capturing the various stages.
The entire plot line plays out wonderfully, with such deceit always being a great tool to drive the story.
Adventures at a museum offer up so many possibilities. ^_^
You did a fantastic job with the transformations themselves, with your descriptions and tempo beautifully capturing the various stages.
The entire plot line plays out wonderfully, with such deceit always being a great tool to drive the story.
Adventures at a museum offer up so many possibilities. ^_^
Really happy to hear you enjoyed it Prowler. I feel like I could have done a bit better with the transformations themselves, but this was my first time writing such tf's, and I feel now that I've done it once, I can do it better when I revist the topic later on. And who knows, perhaps in my next museum tale, a certain mouse or coyote will be the victim of choice. :)
I though you did just fine, especially with this being your time on this type of transformation.
There must always be a balance between what you put down and what you leave to the reader's imaginations, and this handled that wonderfully. :)
Yeah, with TFs done in as a fetish, more description tends to be better, but you still have to be careful to not overdo it, and result in a story that's wordy. ;)
And I'm sure any rats or coyotes would love having an adventure at a museum. ^_^
There must always be a balance between what you put down and what you leave to the reader's imaginations, and this handled that wonderfully. :)
Yeah, with TFs done in as a fetish, more description tends to be better, but you still have to be careful to not overdo it, and result in a story that's wordy. ;)
And I'm sure any rats or coyotes would love having an adventure at a museum. ^_^
*grins and rubs the back of my head.* Apologies for not putting a tad bit more description into the transformations. Truth was, this is my first time writing a fossilization tf, So I was more making it up as I went along, and I was a bit pressed for time because I wanted to get it finished for the people in my stream before it finished. But when I do revist the topic, I will be putting more work into it. Every story I work on is a little bit more practice so I can improve the tales I can bring to all of you.
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