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NEW POEM!!! WOOT!! \(^o^)/
Alright, so the last few weeks of school are dishing out the pain; thus, I haven't had much time for constructive thought. Luckily, I found some time to do this baby! =P
This is my FIRST attempt at the Shakespearean sonnet. I decided to go for something simple and predetermined, so I wouldn't have to think TOO hard; though, I can make up for that laziness with my intricate concepts and word weaving. ;3
Some facts about the Shakespearean sonnet:
1.) There are 14 lines --> 3 quatrains, and a heroic couplet (as my good friend
maxgoof calls them) lol
2.) Each line is written in iambic pentameter.
Also, this is my THIRD homophone poem. That's not really a style, but I'm calling it that because this poem makes use of two words that sound the same (and are spelled differently), but mean completely different things. Hopefully, you'll notice those two words. They're EXTREMELY relevant to FULLY understanding this piece! =O
If you're curious about my other homophone poems, here are the links:
--> "Died Red ~Ripple~"
--> "(K)night Into Dreams"
Enjoy! ^^
Until next poem! ;D
Alright, so the last few weeks of school are dishing out the pain; thus, I haven't had much time for constructive thought. Luckily, I found some time to do this baby! =P
This is my FIRST attempt at the Shakespearean sonnet. I decided to go for something simple and predetermined, so I wouldn't have to think TOO hard; though, I can make up for that laziness with my intricate concepts and word weaving. ;3
Some facts about the Shakespearean sonnet:
1.) There are 14 lines --> 3 quatrains, and a heroic couplet (as my good friend
maxgoof calls them) lol2.) Each line is written in iambic pentameter.
Also, this is my THIRD homophone poem. That's not really a style, but I'm calling it that because this poem makes use of two words that sound the same (and are spelled differently), but mean completely different things. Hopefully, you'll notice those two words. They're EXTREMELY relevant to FULLY understanding this piece! =O
If you're curious about my other homophone poems, here are the links:
--> "Died Red ~Ripple~"
--> "(K)night Into Dreams"
Enjoy! ^^
Until next poem! ;D
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Lol, I don't fave all of them.
But I can't help it if I do. You write amazing poems. If I like a poem, I fave it. Even it is just one line that catches my attention. That one line can change the whole perspective of the poem for me. ^^
Plus, you know better than anyone else, that if I don't like something, I WILL let you know. Silly puppy. XD
But I can't help it if I do. You write amazing poems. If I like a poem, I fave it. Even it is just one line that catches my attention. That one line can change the whole perspective of the poem for me. ^^
Plus, you know better than anyone else, that if I don't like something, I WILL let you know. Silly puppy. XD
Not at all silly yote! x3
You're probably right though. =/
It may be because there wasn't any...MAGIC in this one. lol
It was VERY realistic, and that's not really my thing. The idea just came to me one day, so I decided to put it to paper. ^^
In all honesty, I think it's rather BLAND! =P
Hehe, consider this an experimental piece! ;D
Thank you for being honest though! ;3
*hugs*
You're probably right though. =/
It may be because there wasn't any...MAGIC in this one. lol
It was VERY realistic, and that's not really my thing. The idea just came to me one day, so I decided to put it to paper. ^^
In all honesty, I think it's rather BLAND! =P
Hehe, consider this an experimental piece! ;D
Thank you for being honest though! ;3
*hugs*
Hehe, oh that thumbnail pic ISN'T where I got the inspiration to write this poem! x3
Trust me, I'll notify the readers of THAT in my comment box! =)
This is one of my RANDOM poem ideas, which I get rather often. ^^
I'm glad you liked it; though it lacked my usual imagery, I think the EMOTIONAL value remained intact. =D
And I don't want to put your poetry to shame! D:
It's just that, now that I'm switching to English for my major, I have to be really GOOD at spinning words rhythmically! (o.O)
*hugs* ^^
Trust me, I'll notify the readers of THAT in my comment box! =)
This is one of my RANDOM poem ideas, which I get rather often. ^^
I'm glad you liked it; though it lacked my usual imagery, I think the EMOTIONAL value remained intact. =D
And I don't want to put your poetry to shame! D:
It's just that, now that I'm switching to English for my major, I have to be really GOOD at spinning words rhythmically! (o.O)
*hugs* ^^
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