
My Raptor self-TF is now done! =)
For the story, I liked a lot the description
Foulfrost wrote as a suggestion for a possible scenario, so here you can have it!
"You were hired as medical staff on an island where today's top scientist were attempting to create intelligent dinosaurs, since the prospect of creating feral ones proved too dangerous.
In secret one the scientists boosted the brain growth with several strains of human DNA, blended with raptor DNA to create a hybrid form of intelligent raptors. Sadly, when the young hatchlings grew up, they began to plan their escape and in the execution of their plan, they bit the man who created them.
To their surprize, he began to mutate slowly into a raptor himself. With added licks and lovebites they sped up his changes until he joined their ranks.
After that, all hell broke loose, lead by their pseudo-father-figure, the raptors began to rampage and infect numerous scientists, observers and even a committee sent to inspect the island's safety. They ate the lawyer though. As medical staff, you're sent to tend to wounds inflicted by the raptors and people wounded in the chaos in hopes to save lives or prevent changes. For this, the infected are kept in a quarantine zone and you mostly stay in the lock-up, safely guarded by several ID scans and retinal scanners.
One day, a hazard patient is brought in and you dare attempt to take him into your care. Despite your efforts, he rapidly changes on his bed and while you try to disinfect one of his scaled hindlegs, his head changes, his eyes turn yellow and wild and he bites you. He leaps up from his table and goes on a furious rampage in the quarantine zone, finding patients and doctors alike to either speed up mutations or infect new victims, lashing his tail to trash most of the medical equipment.
Meanwhile, grabbing your arm, you bolt away for the save zone, the bite isn't too bad, surely. If you can get inside, you can tend to yourself carefully. But your hand and arm is already changing, nails turning into large claws and brown scales creeping along your skin. Your pace speeds up when the muscle in your legs bulks up to fit a raptor's body. Your feet rip open your shoes by the time you finally stumble upon the scanners, almost crashing into the door. The ID card reader beeps green when you present your card, but when you place your eye in front of the retinal scanner, the red light turns on. You blink with your predatory, yellow eyes in shock and confusion. And stumble back, tripping over your tearing clothes while your body undergoes faster and faster mutations.
Finally, you fall over onto your flank when your tail rips your pants to shreds, and upsets your balance. You lay on the ground, humanity rapidly being replaced by a large raptor, the medical suit a frail reminder of who you were before while the door continues to beep "ACCESS DENIED, ACCESS DENIED"
Your glasses fall from your new, long muzzle and break on the tile floor while you stare at the locked doors and the blinking red light. 'Now what?!' "
Original concept: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21427698/
Sketched version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21955536/
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Illustration done with Promarkers on A5 paper (14.8*21 cm)
Hope you'll enjoy this one!
For the story, I liked a lot the description

"You were hired as medical staff on an island where today's top scientist were attempting to create intelligent dinosaurs, since the prospect of creating feral ones proved too dangerous.
In secret one the scientists boosted the brain growth with several strains of human DNA, blended with raptor DNA to create a hybrid form of intelligent raptors. Sadly, when the young hatchlings grew up, they began to plan their escape and in the execution of their plan, they bit the man who created them.
To their surprize, he began to mutate slowly into a raptor himself. With added licks and lovebites they sped up his changes until he joined their ranks.
After that, all hell broke loose, lead by their pseudo-father-figure, the raptors began to rampage and infect numerous scientists, observers and even a committee sent to inspect the island's safety. They ate the lawyer though. As medical staff, you're sent to tend to wounds inflicted by the raptors and people wounded in the chaos in hopes to save lives or prevent changes. For this, the infected are kept in a quarantine zone and you mostly stay in the lock-up, safely guarded by several ID scans and retinal scanners.
One day, a hazard patient is brought in and you dare attempt to take him into your care. Despite your efforts, he rapidly changes on his bed and while you try to disinfect one of his scaled hindlegs, his head changes, his eyes turn yellow and wild and he bites you. He leaps up from his table and goes on a furious rampage in the quarantine zone, finding patients and doctors alike to either speed up mutations or infect new victims, lashing his tail to trash most of the medical equipment.
Meanwhile, grabbing your arm, you bolt away for the save zone, the bite isn't too bad, surely. If you can get inside, you can tend to yourself carefully. But your hand and arm is already changing, nails turning into large claws and brown scales creeping along your skin. Your pace speeds up when the muscle in your legs bulks up to fit a raptor's body. Your feet rip open your shoes by the time you finally stumble upon the scanners, almost crashing into the door. The ID card reader beeps green when you present your card, but when you place your eye in front of the retinal scanner, the red light turns on. You blink with your predatory, yellow eyes in shock and confusion. And stumble back, tripping over your tearing clothes while your body undergoes faster and faster mutations.
Finally, you fall over onto your flank when your tail rips your pants to shreds, and upsets your balance. You lay on the ground, humanity rapidly being replaced by a large raptor, the medical suit a frail reminder of who you were before while the door continues to beep "ACCESS DENIED, ACCESS DENIED"
Your glasses fall from your new, long muzzle and break on the tile floor while you stare at the locked doors and the blinking red light. 'Now what?!' "
Original concept: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21427698/
Sketched version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21955536/
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Illustration done with Promarkers on A5 paper (14.8*21 cm)
Hope you'll enjoy this one!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Transformation
Species Dinosaur
Size 1278 x 900px
File Size 1.39 MB
Listed in Folders
Haha.. neato may i add my own?
ok here goes
Late in the 22nd century after after large combined efforts DNA for most breeds of prehistoric dinosaurs have been sequenced. although as the genome is only found in order to produce eggs and viable offspring a for form "host egg" must be used. The science team on this project. including you were spicing human eggs with raptor eggs as a test. Using a virus to deliver the DNA.
the first results were not promising and as were the next. you begin to feel more and more frustrated as time goes on and pressure from shareholders. this causes you to get lazy , stay up late. Just trying to make it work. One late night roughly around 3AM you hear the sound of the furnace destroying the 102# attempt. you try the last type of modified virus. if this doesn't work , you're calling it quits. You take the small vile out of the centrifuge and place the syringe in the vial. as you begin to inject the egg with the virus your hand slips causing you to inject some of the fluid into you. You let out an angry sigh as you get up and walk over to the washing station. "those where my last pair of gloves" it wasn't like you haven't done this before its just that nothing ever happened. after finding a new pair of gloves in the broom closet, you get back to work. The clock ticks to 4 am , the eggs are in the incubator and you are cleaning up. you get up from your chair, a sudden wooze hits you and you stumble, you try to shake the feeling but it wont go away. Before you know it you fall flat on your face and on the floor writhing in pain. you skin begins to feel hot as your face begins to cramp. your intestines churn and writhe as you try to scream. At this point the pain is too much to handle as your pass out.
you wake up , it is currently 5AM and sun is streaming through the window and you feel cold. you shiver as you open your eyes to find a rather large snout infront of you. in terror you get up trying to get your way out so that no one sees you. you stumble on your new body to the retinal scanner trying to open the door to let you out. but your eyes have changed your body has changed you're not what you used to be. the system turns red and a text reading [ACCESS DENIED ; UNKNOWN USER] appears. you try again slamming your reptilian head into the sanner over and over. each comming up with the same message
[ACCESS DENIED]
[ACCESS DENIED]
[ACCESS DENIED]
Tell me what you think , there may be a few errors in the typing but the whole card thin seemed a little unrealistic to me :p
ok here goes
Late in the 22nd century after after large combined efforts DNA for most breeds of prehistoric dinosaurs have been sequenced. although as the genome is only found in order to produce eggs and viable offspring a for form "host egg" must be used. The science team on this project. including you were spicing human eggs with raptor eggs as a test. Using a virus to deliver the DNA.
the first results were not promising and as were the next. you begin to feel more and more frustrated as time goes on and pressure from shareholders. this causes you to get lazy , stay up late. Just trying to make it work. One late night roughly around 3AM you hear the sound of the furnace destroying the 102# attempt. you try the last type of modified virus. if this doesn't work , you're calling it quits. You take the small vile out of the centrifuge and place the syringe in the vial. as you begin to inject the egg with the virus your hand slips causing you to inject some of the fluid into you. You let out an angry sigh as you get up and walk over to the washing station. "those where my last pair of gloves" it wasn't like you haven't done this before its just that nothing ever happened. after finding a new pair of gloves in the broom closet, you get back to work. The clock ticks to 4 am , the eggs are in the incubator and you are cleaning up. you get up from your chair, a sudden wooze hits you and you stumble, you try to shake the feeling but it wont go away. Before you know it you fall flat on your face and on the floor writhing in pain. you skin begins to feel hot as your face begins to cramp. your intestines churn and writhe as you try to scream. At this point the pain is too much to handle as your pass out.
you wake up , it is currently 5AM and sun is streaming through the window and you feel cold. you shiver as you open your eyes to find a rather large snout infront of you. in terror you get up trying to get your way out so that no one sees you. you stumble on your new body to the retinal scanner trying to open the door to let you out. but your eyes have changed your body has changed you're not what you used to be. the system turns red and a text reading [ACCESS DENIED ; UNKNOWN USER] appears. you try again slamming your reptilian head into the sanner over and over. each comming up with the same message
[ACCESS DENIED]
[ACCESS DENIED]
[ACCESS DENIED]
Tell me what you think , there may be a few errors in the typing but the whole card thin seemed a little unrealistic to me :p
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