Here is just two short thoughta I had about this

interesting
worth reading ^^

Why thank you. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

Whew! That was an epic read. A very good story, I enjoyed it a lot.

The nit-picker in me wants to say that a katana is probably not the best blade for a vampire to use, as the extreme edge hardening tended to make it rather more fragile than other types of blades. It certainly wouldn't hold up to the kind of abuse a super-strong vampire could put it through - the first time Aidan or David tried an opposed parry, one or the other of the blades would have snapped. Actually, that's probably true of most historical blades, no matter what their origin, with the likely exception of some of the more over-built two-handers.

But that's just the nit-picker, and the rest of me is easily able to suppress him and get on with enjoying the story.

I should add that a katana is a great sword for killing vampires, as it was optimized for cutting unarmoured targets - which is what these vampires are. It's just not a great sword for vampires to be fencing with.

Heh. Well, I've never been one to let picky historical facts get in the way of a good story. (I mean if we're being realistic this whole thing is completely impossible from beginning to end.)

As long as you're not hauling out the ol' tank-buster katanas, I'm fine with it.

As noted before, I really enjoyed the story. I suppose you've heard others say your writing is good enough to be professionally published? Well, I'll add my voice to theirs.

Considering that some of those comments have been "u relly rite well, i liked it, u shuld get published" I'm not sure I believe them. XD But thank you.