Ok guys so here is part 1 of the first chapter of my superhero story I am writing for  maririn maririn This is all still in the rough draft stage so expect errors and such. But I do want feed back and ideas. I currently have a grand total of 40 pages, two chapters.

Please note; I do love sci-fi and futuristic technology, but I can NOT explain it properly to save my life so there is a lot of errors in my story and a lot of lengthy descriptions.

This takes place in the not to distant future, in a time of world war. A group of scientists are in the middle of creating a new element that can power the metropolis for ten years.

Hope you all like.

Special thanks to all those who are helping me with this story. You know who you are and I truly do appreciate your help ;) <3