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Guys i wanna thank all of you for being awesome and supporting this comic!! I am super excited to try and make more chapters! I felt this was the perfect way to introduce THE NEW ME! and you guys have shown so much love! makes me really want to continue! so please wait for me to make more, in between this time till the next chapter ill try and come up with some more content!
Thanks also for your thoughts and criticism! i welcome it even now, good or bad! please let me know what you think and ill make sure to take notes haha
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Thanks also for your thoughts and criticism! i welcome it even now, good or bad! please let me know what you think and ill make sure to take notes haha
Story and art by Gill Panda
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Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Alien (Other)
Size 978 x 1280px
File Size 1.16 MB
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I know I haven't commented on this comic series or others, but honestly. I love it all. The character designs, the art, the worlds, the language. I can tell a lot of effort and love was put into it, which is really great to see! I've eagerly awaited seeing the next page, and more of the characters. (Especially Battu, she's super cute, I want to give her a hug.) I'm excited to see how the next chapter goes! Please take your break to rest after posting pages so often. I know it's not easy work making comics all the time. Thank you for making such an interesting comic with great art, characters, and story! Keep up the amazing work! <3
Thank you sooo much! yeah I wanted to create a new fursona, and a story behind myself as the blue alien, something where I can grow and improve myself in it. Chapter 2 is currently being worked on now. well at least I'm still writing up some stuff lol. but its getting done!
Uhm.. well.. they're half right.. battu DID kinda cause them to be thumpa-bumped around their ship.. but that could be a bit of a technicality... Methinks though that Battu needs to learn a bit of TACT and HUMILITY now... They're far too blunt and far too brash, and need to learn when/how to take a chill pill and access the situation.
Hey, so I bought the comic now when its all up on here, I wanted to get it sooner but I didn't have the money available then, but better late than never right? I'm always happy to support my favorite artists, great job on this chapter, I'll definitely be getting all the others to come. Good job.
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Late to commenting on this, but I really really enjoyed this comic! It was extremely well paced overall, had gorgeous artwork, adorable character designs, and quirky humor! I could tell a lot of it was anime/manga inspired in how it tells the story, but it also had a flair to the storytelling that was very much you in your personality and how you do comics! Even if your other comics are NSFW, your storytelling transitioned just as nicely into a clean tale!
From my memory of the chapter, the only negatives I can say are that some parts, namely when they were fighting the snake, dragged on a little bit (maybe by 2-3 pages), and often the dialogue was a bit unnatural (not counting Battu's third-person talk). As in, sometimes characters were a little expositiony, talking out loud things that you could have let the readers infer from the visuals (Example is when the villain and Battu kept talking to themselves in their ships). While some of it was needed, it's good to think "If I removed this dialogue, would the pictures still make sense?" This is of course preference-based as well! As said, anime/manga often exposition a lot, and I can tell your comics are influenced by that so it's certainly not a horrible thing! But something worth suggesting. Your art is plenty clear, as is your storytelling that you could easily get away with less words!
Overall I'm eager to read more and I wish you the best of luck! As a webcomic creator myself, I understand the workload and really really admire how much you were able to accomplish so fast. It's goals
From my memory of the chapter, the only negatives I can say are that some parts, namely when they were fighting the snake, dragged on a little bit (maybe by 2-3 pages), and often the dialogue was a bit unnatural (not counting Battu's third-person talk). As in, sometimes characters were a little expositiony, talking out loud things that you could have let the readers infer from the visuals (Example is when the villain and Battu kept talking to themselves in their ships). While some of it was needed, it's good to think "If I removed this dialogue, would the pictures still make sense?" This is of course preference-based as well! As said, anime/manga often exposition a lot, and I can tell your comics are influenced by that so it's certainly not a horrible thing! But something worth suggesting. Your art is plenty clear, as is your storytelling that you could easily get away with less words!
Overall I'm eager to read more and I wish you the best of luck! As a webcomic creator myself, I understand the workload and really really admire how much you were able to accomplish so fast. It's goals
This is one of the things I've address specifically in the issue two script editing; giving the dialogue this more natural flow. We're getting into more personal character moments rather than fast-paced melodrama, characters from the same basic stock are giving individual turns of phrase and actions, and information is conveyed more from the sidelines, with background details and opinions on things happening being given, rather than stating out loud what they already know. Everything to give the sense of this comic world being alive.
Oh ok, for a while I thought maybe this was just a project to see how well you're artwork had improved or somrthing. Since a lot of your stuff was comma, glad I was wrong though. I really like the story :o. But I had 1 thing to say if I may, if you plan on co ringing it, maybe you could make extra money by having people pay certain amounts to have their characters as bg characters, or bg species maybe?
Soooo....the people in the street would've let them bleed to death if they weren't a prince, but the person who actually tried to get them to a hospital in the first place gets arrested because they want someone to blame? I get the feeling that this planets views on common decency/compassion and criminal justice are a bit skewed from our own.
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