
Sorry for taking so long. Suggestions are always welcome. Please tell me what you think.
This is a continuation of a transformation story about a girl named Sarah. In this chapter she visits the veterinarian's clinic to find out what she is to become and learn a little more about the virus that is causing the change.
This is a continuation of a transformation story about a girl named Sarah. In this chapter she visits the veterinarian's clinic to find out what she is to become and learn a little more about the virus that is causing the change.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Housecat
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 10.5 kB
Hope her boyfriend doesn't change too and has some sort of immunitity to the virus but not good enough to cure those that are infected already, thinking the changes that might happen is the coloration disorder in the hair, like black becoming brown or yellow or the other way around, but that's the only thing that will change to prove he has semi-immunity to it. (idea sort of came from 28 months later where the prove to the immunity to the rage virus was the change of was one of the eyes, put with PAWS it seemed better with natural hair color change) I feel like that could bring another conflict in Sarah's story as both of them thought she infected him but it wasn't a complete infection.
Anyway sorry to come up with a strange idea like that, it looks like she's turning into a cat anyway, it seemed like you pulled off a good job of having people misinterpreting that she was going to be a rabbit instead, good job. ^^; I guess next is whether or not to decide to have her take those pictures through the changes.
Anyway sorry to come up with a strange idea like that, it looks like she's turning into a cat anyway, it seemed like you pulled off a good job of having people misinterpreting that she was going to be a rabbit instead, good job. ^^; I guess next is whether or not to decide to have her take those pictures through the changes.
Even though we're both pushing our ideas on this person, we both have completely different ideas on how he should change, probably chances are as normally it should depending on a normal author would go through to make this, is to have him change anyway. I'm basically saying he doesn't need to change at all, he doesn't need to become anthro just to be with her, but that's how things are anyway for most part. But all we can do is just speculate on what Tygepc is going to do anyway. *sigh*
It would be a twist if her boyfriend already had PAWS and keep it a secret form Sarah and everyone else.... or he gets PAWS within the next months and during the time between some of her first noticeable changes! Also maybe later on in the story she starts or host a club to form a "Furry-Human Alliance Or FHA"! Im just spitting out random ideas, can't wait for the next one!
I really like the aspect of a long-term transformation and the psychological effects on the transformee, and I also like the decision on your part for her to become a cougar. I haven't seen too many of these stories around the internet; rather, most of them have been either instantaneous or very fast, occuring within a time period of about 5 minutes to as much as an hour.
I can't wait for more of this story; as Changeling137 said, it's one of the better TF stories that I've read. There could be a couple of grammar improvements, but overall, it flows really well.
Shame that the chapters aren't longer.
I can't wait for more of this story; as Changeling137 said, it's one of the better TF stories that I've read. There could be a couple of grammar improvements, but overall, it flows really well.
Shame that the chapters aren't longer.
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