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and here is my seconded ink test with high contrast and tone.
this one is a lil better tho the background is a bit to simple.
but if I did make it more complex the characters would blend in.
still trying to find a good mix of the two.
well at least this looks more pleasing to the eye then the last one.
a bit more stylistic here.
working to this>>>>
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lpf5_mHR_tw
this one is a lil better tho the background is a bit to simple.
but if I did make it more complex the characters would blend in.
still trying to find a good mix of the two.
well at least this looks more pleasing to the eye then the last one.
a bit more stylistic here.
working to this>>>>
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lpf5_mHR_tw
Category All / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1024 x 1456px
File Size 506.7 kB
I think both versions have too much of one thing. I think this one, the dots are rather really strong and makes it hard to look at with so many. As for the previous one, I think there isn't enough shading added into it. What you did with the coat and trees in the Whited one was good. It created shades and texture, but the places that are blank seemed empty and flat. More like they were meant to be colored in. In this one you seems to create shades and color with the dots, but the dots are so strong that they appear more as dots that almost stand alone than shade and color in certain areas. This is most apparent in Panels 1, 2, and 4.
I think a combination of both would be good. In the white areas in Panel 3, I would suggest adding hash marks to the shaded areas of the chairs. or other areas that have nonflat surfaces.
I think a combination of both would be good. In the white areas in Panel 3, I would suggest adding hash marks to the shaded areas of the chairs. or other areas that have nonflat surfaces.
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