Until the bucket has been raised,
beware of tainted water-wells.

really like this line

WOOT! x3

I'm so glad you caught the relevance of that line! =D

It just CAME to me while I was in the midst of writing this! (o.O)

I mean, being how deep it is, how do you know it's WATER you're fishing up? Are you ASSUMING it's water because it's a WATER well? People have deemed it as such, and so it is. (....or is it?) D:

that was such a rambling mess haha

Very, very nice.

Why THANKS yous! =D

wow shells or human husks? you cant decide only divine ones can.

btw i just watched one man wrecking machine the music video and now im think i might right a fucking epic or a short book cuz you know i love time paradoxes!

till later man byes

I appreciate the comment man! =P

And go for it; writing is after all one of the MANY ways one can express him/herself! \(^o^)/

*falls out of chair* wow you've really done it this time! =P this is definitely my favorite one! moar!!

Reawwy?! :>

*hugs you tight*

*then helps you up back into your chair* x3

*cries* I'm so happy you dedicated such an awe-inspiring poem after me. You did a GREAT job of describing my other half.

"Again I say: do not be fooled;
for once ensnared, you cannot flee!
I pray that you aren't curtained by
their veils of false divinity."

My mind exploded when I read this ending stanza. Such a beautiful and creative web of words you used there.
Nicely done, my friend. A definite fave for me. *licks and hugs tight* ^_^

Heeeeee! x3

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^

After all, I know YOU better than anyone! ;3

Carry on OH deceptive one! D:

wow. o-o

That's a really sweet notion. I know it rather well... I've learnt all the hard ways not to trust anyone's thoughts of divinity but my own. But so many don't have the time or patience to think on such matters... which is why they should read this. I've seen so many black halos, so many self-righteous people who at the core, don't even know what it is they believe in.

And nobody can be free if they are tied down by the beliefs of another, particularly one they don't bother to fully understand...

that's what I gather, anyways. X3

Hehe, doesn't this poem just make ya wanna PONDER! x3

I'm glad I could reach out to you with this one. I thought it was an interesting subject, so I picked up my pencil and went to town on it! =O

To me, poetry is all about OBSCURITY! Say what you want, BUT don't say it in a way where the reader can RIGHT-OFF-THE-BACK understand. HIDE the meaning; CLOAK its true visage. This is the path I have chosen for myself! ;D


Well, there will CERTAINLY be more to come Styx! I really appreciate ALL of your comments. Due stay tuned for more! :>

ANd tuned I shall remain. ^w^

THIUS IS GREAT FRIEND

Why THANKS you! <3

Another great poem and it message in it as well.

I DO believe I have a fan! D:

*hugs* ^^

Thanks! ;3

You're welcome, and I'm guessing you do. *hugs* ^^