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I love the ending of this one C, and the tension and emotion of last chapter's fight between sisters. I'm surprised it doesn't happen more often. These are ladies of conviction and passion, so butting heads would seem like something that happened fairly often. Heh, only 7 feet deep.
Also, I was intrigued by the bio-luminescent eyes thing. Very clever idea.
TM
Also, I was intrigued by the bio-luminescent eyes thing. Very clever idea.
TM
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