Mmm... Looks Goods Buts Maybes Ifs Yous Wenst A Wittle Morz Bizarre.
Freakish.

Ands Yous Has Tos Chages dats Background Ish Aweful. =P
*Giggles*
Sowie, Couldnts Help Its.

more bizarre? Eh, I'm not sure that'd fit, but thanks for the input. And I know the bg sucks that's why I asked for it to be ignored...heh, in fact it really isn't a background at all.

Well, I like it. Especially if you're having it take place in a virtual world, the white lines could help distinguish reality from the cyber world. Just a thought, but you could use black lines for characters when they're in the real world. That way you wouldn't have to reference which world they're in all the time. *thinks and adjusts his top hat* I think I explained that well.

I do like the color. I'd keep with it if you want to. Depends on the feel you want, really. I do think "apart" should be "a part" though. XD

I can't think of anything else to say, so yeah. ^_^ It does look like it's shaping up well though. Can't wait to see your comic started.

Thank you for the comment! x3

Ah, it all takes place in a "virtual" world...and since it's gonna be more of an experimental type of thing(as a comic) that may never come out as clear...eh, you'll see.

*das Salute!* *grins* Experiments are always fun. ^_^