
As some of you know, i would like to make a my own comic series with my own charas someday, but till then i prefer to do some "experimenting" like this one.
In here i made a sort of "trailer" about the first chapter of the story, callen "the awakening" as it's referred to the awakening of the dimensional guardians, and how the whole series started up, Ota knowing Aya and Kouji, the legend of the fight of the Guardians against Chaos and it's return, and then Ota's first battle with Aperion, his own Mech-Guardian.
This is an experiment also to see (and show) how the series would look like (if i may make it now, but i'll wait more before to REALLY start something) in terms of colors, lineart and general quality, and to hear from more pepole as possible what's good, what's bad, what they think i got to change and so on, that's why i may need even opinions from those already having a comic series, and i may need it in particular.
I accept critiques, suggestions, comments, anything, just one thing: DON'T JOKE please, i spent VERY long time to do these three pages so please, at least try to respect what i done if you think is ridiculous.
In conclusion, special thanks to
Tydrian
chef_cheiro
Ximonr for theyr hints and suggestions
Btw, here page 1
In here i made a sort of "trailer" about the first chapter of the story, callen "the awakening" as it's referred to the awakening of the dimensional guardians, and how the whole series started up, Ota knowing Aya and Kouji, the legend of the fight of the Guardians against Chaos and it's return, and then Ota's first battle with Aperion, his own Mech-Guardian.
This is an experiment also to see (and show) how the series would look like (if i may make it now, but i'll wait more before to REALLY start something) in terms of colors, lineart and general quality, and to hear from more pepole as possible what's good, what's bad, what they think i got to change and so on, that's why i may need even opinions from those already having a comic series, and i may need it in particular.
I accept critiques, suggestions, comments, anything, just one thing: DON'T JOKE please, i spent VERY long time to do these three pages so please, at least try to respect what i done if you think is ridiculous.
In conclusion, special thanks to



Btw, here page 1
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Well he's trying to be constructive. Proper spelling is 'their' and 'said', not 'theyr' or 'sayd'. It's just constructive criticism, if you can change it you should. I don't know your language but I'd sure like someone to set me straight if I mangled it.
By the way, the relief is beautiful, you have an excellent eye for detail and I very much like the view from space and the view as you descend.
By the way, the relief is beautiful, you have an excellent eye for detail and I very much like the view from space and the view as you descend.
YEs i accept criticisms, i didn't say i don't XDXDXD
Just i thought it was like this because a my friend told me was fine like this too, but well, then next time i'll ask for more opinions then ^^
I'm a MANIAC for details, this happens when you're into giant robots and that mechanical thigns where you are "forced" on details, but if you like it, you get it and you leatn much on this :3:3:3
Just i thought it was like this because a my friend told me was fine like this too, but well, then next time i'll ask for more opinions then ^^
I'm a MANIAC for details, this happens when you're into giant robots and that mechanical thigns where you are "forced" on details, but if you like it, you get it and you leatn much on this :3:3:3
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