amazing work Adoir i bow to you

Do not bow, for are both equal.

But its funny for all the content I think up I can't get passed spelling errors. DX

"You hold to lock and key"

"to" is suppose to be "the"

I did it again! Damn it!

For we are both equal*

hahaha ya everyone does that. i read over my poems like 60 times then as soon as i put it up i go "WTF! how did i spell the wrong!!@#@$!"

Its bullshit, I tell you, bullshit.

Yes! *roars*

That sounds great... but the fact is that there is too much people in this world(so there has to be limits, if not all those people can`t posible live close by) and for not mention that is all cut by frontiers(physicals and of mind)...

Well maybe the apocalypse change that, no? LoL

This only based off of my beliefs. No matter the amount of people in this world, the universe is so much more vast, there is endless space and dimensions that anything can happen. People only place the barriers they choose, you limit yourself.

Example: I shoot someone. Their life doesn't end at that moment, they merely split off into a different world where they see that they didn't shot and are alive and well, mean while in my world, the localized reality I choose to view, I have just shot and killed this person.

I'm gonna have to read this again when I'm actually completely awake.....but I like your work so......I'm definitely going to +watch you..........and re-read this later, and leave a comment that's more intelligent than: 'ooh, words....'

Well this is one of my favourites so I do hope you enjoy it when you re-read it.

It seems kinda like it is a life story.....they were trapped but are free now. now that they are free they can do anything. their death is coming, but it is just another journey that they have complete control over.........But other than that I still find myself at a loss as to what it means. it's very well written though.

Its meant to be inspirational. Because everybody has the power to control everything.

Oh....well that's probably why it didn't click.....I keep having dreams where I have no control over anything that's going on......my main guess about that is that I feel like I have no control over what's going on in my life.

You always have control, the only reason you see it as you aren't, is because of that simple fact: That you're seeing things like you can't control them. EVERY aspect of your life is under your control.