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Worried about a burn out of the two Deans. Whitestripe and Leogun are ordered by their father figure, Nea, to go find some part time jobs to get a change of pace. Answering a want ad, the two boys head to a robotics company where the CEO is more then happy to add them on to the work force.
This was a fun little robot transformation and hypnosis story that
Caudle and I wrote together yesterday. I hope you all enjoy this tale, and if you do, please fav and leave a comment, I love to hear what you all think of our stories.
This was a fun little robot transformation and hypnosis story that
Caudle and I wrote together yesterday. I hope you all enjoy this tale, and if you do, please fav and leave a comment, I love to hear what you all think of our stories.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Tiger
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 25.9 kB
Listed in Folders
Your spacing is a little off this time compared to the last ones.
As for the content itself, you got a few typoes in there. (ie, add rather than ad, permanent with an excess 'e' at the end.) and it's well... yeah, obviously the kinds of stuff that happens in Lunar City. xD Go out for part time job, get it instantly at the cost of your identity. Well that's okay - at least this stuff is temporary and they probably will get the switch... if they can find it that is. :P (hope it's not some poor dog...)
Good thing they didn't go to that Department Store either...
As for the content itself, you got a few typoes in there. (ie, add rather than ad, permanent with an excess 'e' at the end.) and it's well... yeah, obviously the kinds of stuff that happens in Lunar City. xD Go out for part time job, get it instantly at the cost of your identity. Well that's okay - at least this stuff is temporary and they probably will get the switch... if they can find it that is. :P (hope it's not some poor dog...)
Good thing they didn't go to that Department Store either...
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