I think that is pretty cool :)...He looks a little paisty and some of the features are a little washed out but that is just fine ^^ I can't wait to see the other. [I'm sorry it was such a rough project on you.]

Thanks. I'm about half finished with it. I think it'll turn out a bit better.

yeah there are alot of features and details that I put in that are beign really washed out that are really awesome design elements. his eyelashes I think are the most blaintant. There are also lots of fine details on his clothes that I think you really could play with ^^ I'm not presurign you of corse. I would rather you do a really good job on one rather than a half-assed attempt at both :p...
I like the way the green and the purple are working together. I like the burgandy color you chose for the clothes but I think that shanging up the shades woudl be nice and the accents I would like to see a bit of the gold that you used in the background. In general I think that alot of the lines can use a bit of darkening. This is a fantastic start though ^^ Thank you so much for workign with me!

Yeah, the washed out and faded lines are what happened when I couldn't ink it and get a clean B&W to work with. I had to color it an entirely new way. While it did get colored, I can't do the crisp color and lines I can with a B&W original.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2262502/ -- not entirely sure it's much better, but I fixed/improved a few things.