Another good poem, I see what you also did there, wrote the stanzas in twos....clever.

Thank yous, again! X3 *gives other 1/2 of hug*

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:3 *squeezes*

Nice job on the poem!

Thankees. :3

Awww, the ending is SUPAH cute! x3

I don't really have much critique for this one Tyrranius; though, I am rather curious as to what happened to the first 3 couplets in comparison to the following 5. The first 3 didn't rhyme, yet the other 5 did. As this is poetry, such things REALLY aren't that important; I just found it to be a tad bit odd. =P

Anyhoo, once again, I have to say that your descriptive skills are getting better and better! ;3

OBSCURITY, FTW! \(^o^)/

That's actually where I took a huge break from writing it, when I came back to it, I had motivation all around me, which is why it started rhyming. :3

Tanks for the comment. *hugs*

YES, HOORAY FOR IT!