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I am NOT trying to upset or insult your hard work, and I'm sure you might already know what I'm about to point out..
Her hand looks funky, the thumb is either to long or the fingers are a little to short.. Plus they look too stiff, no bend in them.. And the hand is just a little too high up to be accrete.. ;~;
(Honestly, I have issues with drawing hands to.. I'm not trying to spit on your art! ;w;)
Other then that, it looks great~! Shadowing or not, I like it! ^w^ I just thought I should point out where you could improve..
(Yes, I know you are young.. But there's no better time to improve one's skills~!)
Please, don't be offended by my habit to notice errors and point them out... I don't try, I just can't help but see flaws, no matter how small they are..
(Trust me, I see every flaw that I make/draw.. I constantly have to erase and try again to the point that the paper gets smudged, ripped, crumbles or the mark just wont get erased because I pressed the pencil down too much/hard.. >.<')
Again, awesome drawing you have! ^w^' I enjoy seeing it~!
Her hand looks funky, the thumb is either to long or the fingers are a little to short.. Plus they look too stiff, no bend in them.. And the hand is just a little too high up to be accrete.. ;~;
(Honestly, I have issues with drawing hands to.. I'm not trying to spit on your art! ;w;)
Other then that, it looks great~! Shadowing or not, I like it! ^w^ I just thought I should point out where you could improve..
(Yes, I know you are young.. But there's no better time to improve one's skills~!)
Please, don't be offended by my habit to notice errors and point them out... I don't try, I just can't help but see flaws, no matter how small they are..
(Trust me, I see every flaw that I make/draw.. I constantly have to erase and try again to the point that the paper gets smudged, ripped, crumbles or the mark just wont get erased because I pressed the pencil down too much/hard.. >.<')
Again, awesome drawing you have! ^w^' I enjoy seeing it~!
Believe me im the same.
Im so good at IMMEDIATELY pointing out errors as soon as someone sends me art.
I know my hands arent to good, and with the long thumb and short fingers: keep in mind her hand is turned to the back, and not completely parallel to the camera angle if you get what i mean. Her fingers have to get shorter.
But i cant do hands better rn and tbh: i dont mind. Like i hate looking at them but yeah. Just ignore them for now, theyll get better.
You should stop making so many excuses for yourself, especially the age part.
It doesnt matter how old you are, if youre at a certain point of skill level or have been actively practicing, criticism is good.
I just want you to know: its not like i dont see it. I just cant make it better.
But as long as my hands look acceptable and dont ruin my image im okay xD
The feet are also both bend the same way, the leg in the back is too long / weird idk how to explain, and lets not start about the flat tail because shes sitting on it (i actually didnt notice that one. Forgot to but it over the dress... whoops.
Im so good at IMMEDIATELY pointing out errors as soon as someone sends me art.
I know my hands arent to good, and with the long thumb and short fingers: keep in mind her hand is turned to the back, and not completely parallel to the camera angle if you get what i mean. Her fingers have to get shorter.
But i cant do hands better rn and tbh: i dont mind. Like i hate looking at them but yeah. Just ignore them for now, theyll get better.
You should stop making so many excuses for yourself, especially the age part.
It doesnt matter how old you are, if youre at a certain point of skill level or have been actively practicing, criticism is good.
I just want you to know: its not like i dont see it. I just cant make it better.
But as long as my hands look acceptable and dont ruin my image im okay xD
The feet are also both bend the same way, the leg in the back is too long / weird idk how to explain, and lets not start about the flat tail because shes sitting on it (i actually didnt notice that one. Forgot to but it over the dress... whoops.
Thing is, I don't know how to spell Criticism.. XD Until you spelled it, I hope I picked the right one.. ._.'
I wasn't trying to make excuses, just trying to clarify that I was in no way trying to be rude or anything like that.
And I somewhat get detailed so people don't get confused by the lack of information. And that you're not alone when it comes to messing up.. ^^'
I wasn't going to say anything about the tail, her left leg, or her feet(Because I didn't want to overload you with negative criticisms)
But Most of those small things can be excused; like the (her) left leg is also lower then the right, But you could say that her leg is lifting up or trying to cross over the other. Or that she's tall to excuse the flaw of her back.. Blah Blah Blah. You get the idea XD
I'm both glad and sad that you saw the mistakes before I mentioned one of them though.. Because it's cool to have a similar.. uhh.. "Habit?" But I know how frustrating it is to have that eye for flaws, I feel bad about it as well.. ;w;
As for age, it was just a joke/advice more the anything else. I started drawing at a young age and I only wish that I got better by drawing even more then I did back then..
ANYWAY! I'm really happy that you're not mad or offended~! People just get butt hurt so easily now days, that I just try to make my point clear that I'm not trying to talk shit to anybody, as insurance XP
Yes, I see how it sounds like I'm making more excuses right now.. But they are not, event if it sounds like they are sometimes..
(I have arguments event to this day with my family because of it, when I'm trying to tell them the truth.. -_-)
I wasn't trying to make excuses, just trying to clarify that I was in no way trying to be rude or anything like that.
And I somewhat get detailed so people don't get confused by the lack of information. And that you're not alone when it comes to messing up.. ^^'
I wasn't going to say anything about the tail, her left leg, or her feet(Because I didn't want to overload you with negative criticisms)
But Most of those small things can be excused; like the (her) left leg is also lower then the right, But you could say that her leg is lifting up or trying to cross over the other. Or that she's tall to excuse the flaw of her back.. Blah Blah Blah. You get the idea XD
I'm both glad and sad that you saw the mistakes before I mentioned one of them though.. Because it's cool to have a similar.. uhh.. "Habit?" But I know how frustrating it is to have that eye for flaws, I feel bad about it as well.. ;w;
As for age, it was just a joke/advice more the anything else. I started drawing at a young age and I only wish that I got better by drawing even more then I did back then..
ANYWAY! I'm really happy that you're not mad or offended~! People just get butt hurt so easily now days, that I just try to make my point clear that I'm not trying to talk shit to anybody, as insurance XP
Yes, I see how it sounds like I'm making more excuses right now.. But they are not, event if it sounds like they are sometimes..
(I have arguments event to this day with my family because of it, when I'm trying to tell them the truth.. -_-)
Welp shit happens. Best adcvice i can give haha~
I mostly only mind criticism because i already see it- i just cant make it perfect with that info. You know how somethimg looks odd but youcant fix it- i just let that happen through time. As long as my pictures look fine im okay with minor mistakes xD
Im not mad or anything, i have no reason, just criticism doesnt really help a lot of the time. Whatever i dont want to ramble on hahaha xD
I mostly only mind criticism because i already see it- i just cant make it perfect with that info. You know how somethimg looks odd but youcant fix it- i just let that happen through time. As long as my pictures look fine im okay with minor mistakes xD
Im not mad or anything, i have no reason, just criticism doesnt really help a lot of the time. Whatever i dont want to ramble on hahaha xD
You're not rambling~! X3 I rather enjoyed out little chat! Event though it ended up doing nothing for either of us.. XP
I didn't know for sure if you saw the mistakes or not, until you first replied that is XD
If I had the right tools(and a computer that didn't suck >w<) I'd offer to fix her hand for free, but I don't so I can only offer useless advice. lol Though, it's your art so.. what ever, you know~!
The most important thing is to always learn from mistakes~! I guess..?
And Yeah, shit happens~! We just need to close our eyes and don't open our mouths when that shit comes flying at us, you know? XDD
I didn't know for sure if you saw the mistakes or not, until you first replied that is XD
If I had the right tools(and a computer that didn't suck >w<) I'd offer to fix her hand for free, but I don't so I can only offer useless advice. lol Though, it's your art so.. what ever, you know~!
The most important thing is to always learn from mistakes~! I guess..?
And Yeah, shit happens~! We just need to close our eyes and don't open our mouths when that shit comes flying at us, you know? XDD
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