Well, more of racial detail document with not much in the racial department. Again, remember edits. Pronouns are capitalized seems to be a problem throughout all your works EX: “Palony” Think Spanish or Chinese for example.
I see more fresh ideas here in terms of good fuel for world building and story potential. The thing though is to tap into that and not fall to clichés of genre.
Good thinking of place and space that is the fuel to make your fiction work, that is where you’ll find your potential the more you ask questions on that the more plot points and character depth you will build.
Remember to show how these races look constantly through a work.
Remember language fits both place and form and function so think of language use in building this fictional world in reference of one person to a next. Language and words contain ideas and perceptions of the world.
Two examples of problems of this below:
Have some logic problems with the “Palony”.. need to think on them and their place in this document. I do like though the consideration of these acritical machine people being seen as an independent automatist group of people. Basically we have robots seen as a civilization here from the speakers perspective when they are well robots. At the same time no one knows, but somehow they know? Think on that problem.
Again “Tredu” being only normal looking people. What is that suppose to mean? There is a lack of otherism here. Our narrative speaker is a “Traze.” A Traze being a Traze is normal. If a Tredu is not a Traze how is that normal looking to a Traze?
This is why asking questions is important as you write.

A forewarning with no offence despite the harsh critique use: Our character is a “Traze” and does not describe them in positive light, but at the same not in an actual negative reflection. You have an entire race summed up as “the outlaws, murderers, whores, and imperfect beings (Again what does this even mean?).” Most societies do not have a view of themselves this way. There needs to be some severe social pressure for them to be this way. Hard for audience to root for the outlaws, murderers, whores, and imperfect beings. There is a bit of hyper grim derp edge lordyness going on here. Think hard on how these people can be real, how do they live on their own volition or don’t in their mountain kingdom (mountain terrain makes it very isolated [exception rule of tech]). If this character is a main character for your works how can you make them an individual in this society unique as an individual. It is to easy to become attached to self-created stereotypes running and great plot that can be come of it.

Still, many good ideas here that can be spent to create wonderful work.

I started with designing a languagebut some network issues happened and I lost all the data so I dropped the story alltogetber