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This is just a crummy li'l story i'm working on and i thought i'd post it on here for some opinions and shit. It isnt done and i am writting more. its a fantasy furry story thats the kind with swords and spells and all that shit. either way theres a li'l gore, yada yada yada.... just read and comment please.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 23.6 kB
Liar, it's not a crummy story... It's a nice piece and you've got me wanting to read more.
As for criticisms, and these are just suggestions to help you improve your work feel free to dismiss any or all of them...
1. You seemed to be missing a number of apostrophes on your contractions.
ex. "That's quite a high level tome, even for you, don't push yourself like your father did. "
2. Yeah, there's a number of spelling mistakes, but you knew that... if you have cable or DSL, I tend to write in Google docs, it's nice cause you can access your stories on different computers and built in spell checking. Just remember spell check is a tool, but it's usually a good idea to re-read what you wrote, sometimes you'll catch things the automatic checker missed.
3. Some people prefer stories to be in *.txt format, just so things can be read on the web page without having to download a file. Just open it in notepad or see if wordpad has a .txt option under save as.
As for criticisms, and these are just suggestions to help you improve your work feel free to dismiss any or all of them...
1. You seemed to be missing a number of apostrophes on your contractions.
ex. "That's quite a high level tome, even for you, don't push yourself like your father did. "
2. Yeah, there's a number of spelling mistakes, but you knew that... if you have cable or DSL, I tend to write in Google docs, it's nice cause you can access your stories on different computers and built in spell checking. Just remember spell check is a tool, but it's usually a good idea to re-read what you wrote, sometimes you'll catch things the automatic checker missed.
3. Some people prefer stories to be in *.txt format, just so things can be read on the web page without having to download a file. Just open it in notepad or see if wordpad has a .txt option under save as.
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