Wow... just wow. that was an amazing piece of work. i really really enjoyed readin this. i personally read a lot of fiction, and this has to be one of the best ones. simply outstanding. made me cry at the end. really got into the story. and the details, made me feel like i was sitting alongside those two. makes me wish that kinda thing would happen to me, you know?

I am glad you liked it!

yeah, one thing i forgot to mention though; at the end i was kinda curious what he was gonna give arty. maybe you could have had him lay it on his grave or somethin. but just a minor detail. i should be thankin you, liek i said i don't usually find good reads like this.

Wow. Quite touching. At first I thought this is just splendid, dialog heavy, light little story. But when the truth is revealed... well, it is interesting, but it's only the end that made me feel sad. The emotion bled through the text. Yeah... Rather liked this, some parts made me smirk and some parts touched me... so, all in all, good job. Nice little piece of prose.

Thanks!