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Xarank: Ah, I remember this. My second visit to Nuver. Nice place.
I'm on fire today. Another story. Wooo! This is an example of a trip Xarnak might have. (Though it kinda sucks. ^^;) Also, I HATE notepad, so I'm swtiching to Word.
I'm on fire today. Another story. Wooo! This is an example of a trip Xarnak might have. (Though it kinda sucks. ^^;) Also, I HATE notepad, so I'm swtiching to Word.
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Reading over your stories, I can tell you're improving as a writer. Plus, the story was a fun, albeit short, read. To top it all off, I'm a big Doctor Who fan, so the TARDIS rocks. My only complaint is spacing. Separating each line of dialog would make for an easier read.
Keep it up, though. I always like seeing writers progress.
Keep it up, though. I always like seeing writers progress.
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