Now that I'm somewhere with internet I can reply to it, she looks very nice
Thank you

Though I did mean to have the heart covering her entire chest in my original design, it's still very nice

I was worried it wasint cute enough and that you wouldn't like it, I tend to draw rabbits kind of creepy.
Well in some of the drawings I thought it looked more like it was more to one side (the side the heart is)
but in my original sketch I put it in the middle but I thought it looked kind of cool like this like her heart is under that patch of fabric, Do you want me to fix it? Cause I can if it really bothers.
Any modifications you want wont be any problem, as long as they wont take me too long.
(basically i cant completely re do everything cause dont have that much time rn cause of homework but I can do it in my breaks)

I made her to bee sorta a creepily cute character, and I thought you'd do a good job with her, which you did, she's great, and that was my original plan, and plans change, so the heart is fine, it's prolly going to stay like that

But again, you did a really great job and I think your art style is perfect for her