Wow, that's pretty nifty. Even in the space of a paragraph, you manage to create a small universe, even if only for the briefest of moments.

I have to say I almost want to know more about Mr. French-vanilla-latte, and his lucky paramour.

Short, but very effective. In such a little space you've managed to simultaneously create two distinct characters and get me interested in what's going on. I'd love to read more.

It needs skill to write something so short and still be able to tell a story. Very well done, the piece is short and simple, but still, I enjoyed reading it very much. Great work.

It means a lot to me to hear random compliments such as this about my work. For Furaffinity I usually write a lot of erotica, and pornography, but at the root of it all is my love for the written word. In this case the piece isn't erotica at all, but the typical compliments I receive are along the lines of 'sexy, me next!' That of which I enjoy, and I am flattered by. But at the same time I'm always longing for something a little deeper, and sometimes a little more critical.

For random people outside of my usual audience to come to me, read what I've wrote, even something as short and simple as this, and compliment the story itself ... the word usage, the flow of the story, the universe I've created ... it means a lot to me, it truly does. So, thank you for this compliment, as little notes like this make the process truly worth it. They keep me motivated to try harder to create beauty in paragraph form.

I'm not random. I'm a Thursday Promptist. It's what I do. I write a prompt response, then read what other's have written and comment.

I meant random as in you're not my normal audience :)

Interesting. Definitely not my style, but I can still see where you're coming from. After all, flirting is supposed to be a universal thing, right? Nicely done in surprisingly few words.

I agree with above commenters: Short, but very effective. You give us just the right details to capture our attention.