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If you've made it all the way down here...goddamn. It must be at least decent if you read the whole thing to get down here :] Unless you just kinda...skipped down here. If you did, shame on you >:C
And with this post, I'd like to victoriously declare my hiatus over! HUZZAH.
Anyway...yeah. This is the beginning, guys. The beginning of my first real attempt at getting something published. Yup, I want to finish this, and find some unlucky bastard to publish this little puppy. c:
I will continue working on this. But, beyond this first chapter...I don't think I'll post anymore to FA. I don't want to risk some selfish fuckers stealing this story. Hence the violent copyright thing at the top.
As for thoughts on the story itself...there are some parts where I'm unhappy with it. What makes me kinda irritated is that the mood just kind of shifts as it progresses after the beginning. I was in a bit of a MASTER WRITER mood for the first few pages, then I just kinda went...eh. *Master Writer mode off*. OR it could be the music I was listening to :/
The song the werewolves were singing was Before I Forget by Slipknot. Generic, I know. I TRIED to incorporate the lyrics, but I ended up binning that idea for the FA version.
PLEASE let me know what you think of this! You don't have to comment, even a fav says volumes to me <3 Either way, thanks for reading guys!
Music I was listening to and inspired by when writing Black Sunshine:
Before I Forget - Slipknot (Inspired Black Sunshine sprint from Zion to the party)
In Stereo - Fort Minor (Inspired actual race scene and the whole story constructed around it)
RAW DOG TONIIIIGHT YEAH - The Last Vegas (Escape scene from party back to Zion)
To Be Honest (TMSABILECFCR) -
xedgewolfx's Augment Diminish (Whole scene from Nolan crashing on the Zion to the end)
Thanks for reading again guys. :] Enjoy and wish me good luck.
Complete Ch1
Prologue l 1.1 l 1.2 l 1.3
And with this post, I'd like to victoriously declare my hiatus over! HUZZAH.
Anyway...yeah. This is the beginning, guys. The beginning of my first real attempt at getting something published. Yup, I want to finish this, and find some unlucky bastard to publish this little puppy. c:
I will continue working on this. But, beyond this first chapter...I don't think I'll post anymore to FA. I don't want to risk some selfish fuckers stealing this story. Hence the violent copyright thing at the top.
As for thoughts on the story itself...there are some parts where I'm unhappy with it. What makes me kinda irritated is that the mood just kind of shifts as it progresses after the beginning. I was in a bit of a MASTER WRITER mood for the first few pages, then I just kinda went...eh. *Master Writer mode off*. OR it could be the music I was listening to :/
The song the werewolves were singing was Before I Forget by Slipknot. Generic, I know. I TRIED to incorporate the lyrics, but I ended up binning that idea for the FA version.
PLEASE let me know what you think of this! You don't have to comment, even a fav says volumes to me <3 Either way, thanks for reading guys!
Music I was listening to and inspired by when writing Black Sunshine:
Before I Forget - Slipknot (Inspired Black Sunshine sprint from Zion to the party)
In Stereo - Fort Minor (Inspired actual race scene and the whole story constructed around it)
RAW DOG TONIIIIGHT YEAH - The Last Vegas (Escape scene from party back to Zion)
To Be Honest (TMSABILECFCR) -
xedgewolfx's Augment Diminish (Whole scene from Nolan crashing on the Zion to the end)Thanks for reading again guys. :] Enjoy and wish me good luck.
Complete Ch1
Prologue l 1.1 l 1.2 l 1.3
Category Story / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 120.2 kB
I wentz to read the description first. DX
Anyways after reading it through last night, I found it pretty entertaining read. I thought it was a little gruesome, but hey I then I thought, hey, I play games like Bioshock and grand theft auto, so why am I thinking that? x3~ Makes meh want to get back to writing myself, but knowing my lazy level. It’s too bad you won’t be posting more x.x I wonder what’s going to happen next, I have so many questions.
Anyways after reading it through last night, I found it pretty entertaining read. I thought it was a little gruesome, but hey I then I thought, hey, I play games like Bioshock and grand theft auto, so why am I thinking that? x3~ Makes meh want to get back to writing myself, but knowing my lazy level. It’s too bad you won’t be posting more x.x I wonder what’s going to happen next, I have so many questions.
HOLY GEEZ APOLLO
WHAT
what.
WHAT.
This is like...I don't even have words.
GIVE ME MORE I NEED IT.
THIS IS GONNA BE MORE FAMOUS THAN THE BIBLE.
Also:
If ANY of you steal this, I WILL come after you.
...*steals* =]
Haha, now, on a more serious note, all through reading this, in my mind I was saying, 'oh geez i'd love to animate this'. EVERYWHERE. I was thinking that. If I had more talent I totally would want to do that for serious. =[
The characters were really easy to like/dislike, the setting was very visual, and like, I'd pay money for this.
COME TO AUSTRALIA AND LETS GET MARRIED onthebeachwithlikeonlyclosefamilyandfriendsandanopenbarYES. =]
*favourites a billion times*
WHAT
what.
WHAT.
This is like...I don't even have words.
GIVE ME MORE I NEED IT.
THIS IS GONNA BE MORE FAMOUS THAN THE BIBLE.
Also:
If ANY of you steal this, I WILL come after you.
...*steals* =]
Haha, now, on a more serious note, all through reading this, in my mind I was saying, 'oh geez i'd love to animate this'. EVERYWHERE. I was thinking that. If I had more talent I totally would want to do that for serious. =[
The characters were really easy to like/dislike, the setting was very visual, and like, I'd pay money for this.
COME TO AUSTRALIA AND LETS GET MARRIED onthebeachwithlikeonlyclosefamilyandfriendsandanopenbarYES. =]
*favourites a billion times*
;-; Joey, you flatter me <3~
I actually want to see this published, and even made into a movie, actually. Like, live action. I would love to see you animate it though <33 It's great you found it so entertaining, this feedback is great, guys.
OPENBARYES.
...Think I'll start a religion with this book? :o
I actually want to see this published, and even made into a movie, actually. Like, live action. I would love to see you animate it though <33 It's great you found it so entertaining, this feedback is great, guys.
OPENBARYES.
...Think I'll start a religion with this book? :o
Either, his first encounter with Todd(which'll be the most challenging, considering facial expressions and all that) or, part of the ending, preferably where he's all one-on-one with Daddy and the whole jump scene. FFFF.
I CAN SEE IT ALL IN MY HEAD i just don't think I'm talented enough to pull it off =[
I'll draw up a rough story board if you'd like?
I CAN SEE IT ALL IN MY HEAD i just don't think I'm talented enough to pull it off =[
I'll draw up a rough story board if you'd like?
Do it up! Imexciteeedddd <3
Let me know if you need anything spelled out anymore! :] This is actually probably a very good idea, because if you can actually make it into a visual work, I can compare it with what the reader sees in his/her mind with what I see in mine.
How long do you think it'll take?
Let me know if you need anything spelled out anymore! :] This is actually probably a very good idea, because if you can actually make it into a visual work, I can compare it with what the reader sees in his/her mind with what I see in mine.
How long do you think it'll take?
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