Bit of a dramatic title for this one, but it works. Its just an introduction of three of my characters and a bit of allusion to the overall plot. We have a mysterious visitor and a hunting contest that will end unexpectedly, if things go the way I plan. This is my first piece of writing I have submitted to the interwebz (gasp) so...don't crucify me, please?

Linea, the Lynx; Me
Wil, the Human; Me
Roihen, the Wolf; Me
If someone could give a bit of critique on this, I would appreciate it. I always wonder if I should spend more time on my writing, so I need someway to spend that 'more' time. Keywords...yeah..what else should I put for a prologue?