Tanner: Nice! Hey Paul can I ask you something?

Yep?

Tanner: Can I maybe work with you at Bayou Landing?

Paul is a lonely bartender ^^" but happy to meet people in his own bar

Tanner: So is that a yes?

Interesting

Thanks a lot Sky! =)

The amount of space there is amazing! So many different rooms and "activities" to do! :3
You're a regular bar blueprint designer, Mr. Gator!

If you look more closely it's not a sooooo big place, there is many rooms yep, but I think it's not too big and not too little =)
People can order a beer and simply stay near a table or play in the billiard room. An other important detail, the "Night Room" is not always open
That's why the size of the bar can evolve during day/night

Ah, ok, now I understand. A normal sized bar with lots to do! Can't wait to visit again!

You got it

Oh wow, that looks awesome. So much space! Say, do you welcome hydras? I'm sure Nina'd love the place.

Of course you're welcome! =)

Awesome! How would it work with the drinks though? Like... one drink for every head, does that count as three? If so he'd best bring a boatload of money.

Oh yes I see...so many heads and so few beers xD

Oh a zen room :D sounds relaxing.

It's actually Paul's room, his bed room, relaxing room and writing room. Since Paul live in his bar it's his kind of OWN room =)

and there's another room with a spanner on the bed :o

It's a very big place...( ºoº)
pole dance --> "paul dance"
Is very witty XD

Hehe thanks a lot *hugs you* Paul will give you some good drinks if you come to see him one day ;)

well... sure /)//w/(\

Awwwww no reasons to blush ^^"

that is because...
Is that I have high blood pressure
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

So many places to visit!!
Is really impressive how Paul build this big place

As I said to Luke it's not so big since some rooms are not open for public...as normal bars and pubs. They are big but clients can't see that.
For example the "Night Room" is not always open That's why the size of the bar can evolve during day/night

Impressive

That's one big place Paul has , a very detailed design you did ^^.

Many thanks ^^ I'm happy you enjoyed!

wow I didn’t think that the bar is so big, but I looks like you can have a relaxing evening and a lot of fun there.

As I said previously, it's not so big in fact ^^"
..and yep Mr Paul can relax a bit after work! =)

Very cool to see this. Would honestly be interested in commissioning blueprints and interior designs from ya at some point if I could.

awww that's really sweet from you. Since some people asked me for that type of commissions....
I think I'll put in my commission info that I'm also okay to create blueprints ^^'' I didn't know if people could be interested

Though one critique I do have is that that kitchen looks pretty small. I honestly question how much food you could make in there for such a large space. Even if people don't order a lot, its hard to tell where you'd cut stuff or put anything in an oven... Or just how many dishes you could even make with such a small space. Especially doesn't help that no storage room is anywhere near that kitchen or even the bar. To get to either storage room, you'd have to go through and around the bar and squeeze past the pinball machine or through the bar past the Billards room or go through his zen room, past the stripper pole and then the billards room.

I'm not an architect or anything, but if I had to theorize a better layout, put his Zen room in the back of the dance floor and next to the storage room along with the security room, make the security room a window if you must have it, expand the kitchen into the zen room, and that storage room should have immediate access to the kitchen from there. Then move the pinball over to billards room so all the games stuff is in one place or the entry lock, so the kitchen can get to the main room more easily. Could also move the bathrooms closer to the window and expand that storage room but that's just a thought.

Sorry for that being a really long critique, and again I'm no expert so feel free to refute my ideas and stuff. Even very possible my ideas are based on what I've seen in the US and might not be what is usual in your country so that could just be my bias on layout. Still think the rest is a-ok and you did a good job overall.

oh don't worry I'm always open minded with critique I love read long text to explain point of you! It allows to understand what people thing and have new ideas for some updates. Be sure that I always prefer that kind of long comment than a simple "that's nice". So I'm really happy that you dropped this critique here! =3 Thanks a lot! I totally understand your point of you and you're right. The thing is also that some elements here don't have a good scales, even the pinball is actually too big (if you compare it to the bed) I'm not an architect too hehe sadly =) I didn't make this plan on a professional software, it also explain so lack of details and big errors with the scale. About the room organisation you're right too. Don't forget there is also a wine cellar under the bar and a big underground storage room (that's not explained and not pictured on the plan)

Thanks a lot again for this really good comment! It helps a lot to improve! I enjoyed to learn the point of view of someone else on it! Thankies! You're welcome!

Haha no problem. Happy to give some thought out critique. And yeah I did miss that wine cellar note so that is good for the design. Just the food needs somewhere to be stored.

Also occurs to be now there should be somewhere for receiving shipments. But a door in the back for that stuff could be under (or over, the stairs don't really indicate whether they're going down or up) Paul's X Room.

Also okay that there are these... idk I'll just say "errors" (even though they're fine) since they do give a good idea of the space and definitely helps with visualizing where characters are and positioning stuff. So even if some stuff is "erroreous" most people won't care as long as the basics of the space makes sense.

Honestly thinking of doing a big project soon and was thinking of having some blueprints for places to help tell artists where I want things to be posed and stuff so having something like this would really help out. Still debating if I should try looking up software to do it myself or ask for your help but having an artist give a second opinion on layouts definitely makes asking an artist very enticing.

I'm very curious about that play room. Is it a "play room"? Oh, and there's totally a popular cellar missing here

The playroom? Here is a drawing I did which take place in the Playroom:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21587862/

SOmething is missing?????? What?

Don't you have a room downstairs where naughty stuff happens?

Am loving this look all you need now is it to be made irl xD only if so

Keep up the ideas and good work !

AHAHAHAH If only it could be real! I wish The Bayou Landing become real one day ^^

Ooh! it has a really cool design! ^w^

Thankies ^^

That is a BIG establishment for one Paul gator. :o

Don't worry for him, it's not so big in fact but he can manage all this easily =) this gator is a good bartender !

I feel like I have learned just as much about your organizational skills (I bet your paperwork is always neatly in order) as I have about how a true bar should be arranged (not like those artificial quality ones in Common Reality).

By the way, I love the puns you put there!

Since I regularly make technical references (though mine are word documents), maybe we could discuss about strategies and such sometime. I think it could be interesting to hear about your process, and we could swap notes about technique.

Either way, neat work (in both senses of "neat").

damn this is good work dude

Thankies ^^"

You have a large bar, Paul. So is the place, looks fancy.

It's not a big bar but lot of people are welcome! =)

Is a big and nice place ^^
are those handcuffs in Paul´s room? 0w0

In the secret room? Yep

What goes on in the playroom?

What goes on in the “x room” and zen room?

Finally, if this is some nightclub, then who’s the bouncer?

THE PLAYROOM:
It's a room in the Bayou Landing with children toys inside? Here's an example of what happen in the room:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21587862

PAUL'S ZEN ROOM:
It's Paul's room/bathroom/bedroom/relaxation room. It's his private room where he can rest and relax after a hard day of work.

PAUL'S X ROOM:
It's simply a secret dungeon which have some accessories, a bed and a shower

During NightClub festivities, Paul also takes the role of the bouncer.

Paul's bar is like the size of a casino. How can he possibly run the place by himself?

Also, according to the blueprint, Paul built his house inside his bar, and it seems to have a playroom for kids can play in while their parents get drunk.