i like how your bodies look

I think they might be a little to far apart

Great pose. I always find your linework fascinating to follow :)

Yay, I figured out his ears, disregard the comment on the first rendition of this about those. ;)

The neck looks a lot better now, but I wasn't complaining the first time on that, I like a strong neck.

Navel moved down a tad, looks perfect. That's one thing I find so frustrating about drawing. As a chef, most things are pretty willy nilly, and can be considered 'close enough', but in drawing it can come down to 1 or 2 mm making all the difference in the world. :)

His cheekbones and eyes and well... everything... I just want to hug the stuffins out of him. ;)

He looks good... but his right ear looks too high for the angle it's at with the head tilted like that

Holy crap Shiuk, does artists always have to through these enigmas? O_o;

His right pectoral, shoulder, and arm look a lot better this time around.
His eyes may be a bit far apart, but I like the look it gives. The naval looks great as well.
Can I ask what those markings are on his side? They look a bit strange >.<

Very good. The neck does seem to fit better than the previous one did

You should draw yourself more D:

That does look a tad better, but still overall gorgeous. Such beautiful artwork you can do X3

yay, I helped....I think, because it still looks shmexy like only a shweeks can make it >w<

<3 love it

eyes look alot better ^.^ i would say maybe push the line between the right (our left) arm and the chest alittle bit further out to make it more defined, and maybe bring the neckline in a bit and make it a bit thinner. Looking awesome though!