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Batgirl's chapter is noticeably longer than many of the others, as I used her to springboard some larger story elements regarding Makatsa and some of the other champions. I'll also admit that this one is a bit of a cop-out as, although Sango beat Batgirl in the actual tournament, I don't actually have them fight (breaking the fighting game rule a bit.) I think this allows the story to take a bit more shape and I couldn't really find a good way to shoehorn it in while also showing mounting resistance against Makatsa as she begins to hold a definite advantage over the remaining champions. This one took a bit of time to write, but I am pretty proud of how it turned out! Let me know what you think and how I can improve my writing. I think that I need improvement on making viewpoint switches more fluid.
We're closing in on the finale and I'll admit, I'm having some issues on how it should go down. If you have any ideas, let me know in the notes!
Meet Batgirl: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13085964/
Batgirl's Transformation: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16179553/
We're closing in on the finale and I'll admit, I'm having some issues on how it should go down. If you have any ideas, let me know in the notes!
Meet Batgirl: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13085964/
Batgirl's Transformation: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16179553/
Category Story / Transformation
Species Bat
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 54 kB
For Transitions and multiple character views work on transitioning on place tied to character, not dialogue. This will help show where characters are at and who are there. Think of where a piece left off and where to pick up. Working on place description will help these transitions.
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