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Description:
Never having used a sword before, I decide to throw it at Gohma, since I was asked to "finish him off".
But Gohma isn't a him, and was getting it on with The Great Diku Tree, who also loves MILFs. ):
As a result, Nishidor is banned from the forest, and scolded by Mido, so that I don't ever come back.
Commentary:
Nishidor is a fuck up and made the old tree cry. He can't use a sword right, and can't stay in his forest home anymore.
But the first day of AMILF is done. (: From here on out I think it'll just be one page a day, three times a week.
It was fun putting my own twist on the Zelda plot though. (:
Description:
Never having used a sword before, I decide to throw it at Gohma, since I was asked to "finish him off".
But Gohma isn't a him, and was getting it on with The Great Diku Tree, who also loves MILFs. ):
As a result, Nishidor is banned from the forest, and scolded by Mido, so that I don't ever come back.
Commentary:
Nishidor is a fuck up and made the old tree cry. He can't use a sword right, and can't stay in his forest home anymore.
But the first day of AMILF is done. (: From here on out I think it'll just be one page a day, three times a week.
It was fun putting my own twist on the Zelda plot though. (:
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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Size 640 x 900px
File Size 281.1 kB
I really like how the story flows from Page 1 to Page 2. The transition is nice and the events move in such a way that it doesn't seem rushed, nor does it seem forced. Very well done.
Quite frankly, I REALLY enjoy the statement of why they had hid the sword for a reason. It makes that whole "boulder" thing make all that more sense when you play through the actual Ocarina of Time. Seriously, who hides the only, metal weapon amidst a deathtrap? The Kokiri are truly a doomed race indeed with a mentality like that.
In the end, though, at least Nishidor gets to keep the sword, right?
Quite frankly, I REALLY enjoy the statement of why they had hid the sword for a reason. It makes that whole "boulder" thing make all that more sense when you play through the actual Ocarina of Time. Seriously, who hides the only, metal weapon amidst a deathtrap? The Kokiri are truly a doomed race indeed with a mentality like that.
In the end, though, at least Nishidor gets to keep the sword, right?
Hehe, I'm glad! (: Unfortunately, I think a lot of the rest of the comic just jumps from place to place - I never draw out all the running in Hyrule field while travelling from Lon Lon Ranch to Death Mountain or anything... but hopefully it won't be too confusing. I really liked your idea of posting the first two pages together! I almost wonder if I should keep it up and post two a day. :3
And I remember talking about that with you. :D I didn't totally realize that myself until you brought it up. Being peace-loving is great, but we all know what happens in seven years... and maybe a sword could have helped. 8D
I think Nishidor is too distraught from what happened, and probably never wants to see/touch the sword again.
And like when it comes to the Master Sword later on, you'll see how he tends to have bad luck when it comes to those shiny blades. :B
And I remember talking about that with you. :D I didn't totally realize that myself until you brought it up. Being peace-loving is great, but we all know what happens in seven years... and maybe a sword could have helped. 8D
I think Nishidor is too distraught from what happened, and probably never wants to see/touch the sword again.
And like when it comes to the Master Sword later on, you'll see how he tends to have bad luck when it comes to those shiny blades. :B
Ooh, I never thought of that. The foreshadowing you shared there is quite intriguing and a matter I'm looking forward to getting into as the story unfolds.
Quite frankly, I believe your story will fair well despite not having tedious, travelling scenes. Running through Hyrule Field, and other places, is kind of a given and, therefore, I feel we as the reader can fill in the gaps between each plot point. :)
Interesting enough, the concept of not going too in-depth of travel or segway points is what you helped teach me to do over these past couple of months. I'm still not perfect at not being overly wordy at places that don't quite need it, but I am getting better. Well, I at least think so, anyway. *cush-cush*
Lastly, as for two pages per post, I'd base it on the response of the audience. I still feel it would be a great idea to post a journal completely dedicated to AMILF so it's always right there on your main page. Plus, you can update it to solicit opinions of the readers such as the two-page post concept. Something like that could add a fun, interactive quality to such a grand piece of personal work. :)
Quite frankly, I believe your story will fair well despite not having tedious, travelling scenes. Running through Hyrule Field, and other places, is kind of a given and, therefore, I feel we as the reader can fill in the gaps between each plot point. :)
Interesting enough, the concept of not going too in-depth of travel or segway points is what you helped teach me to do over these past couple of months. I'm still not perfect at not being overly wordy at places that don't quite need it, but I am getting better. Well, I at least think so, anyway. *cush-cush*
Lastly, as for two pages per post, I'd base it on the response of the audience. I still feel it would be a great idea to post a journal completely dedicated to AMILF so it's always right there on your main page. Plus, you can update it to solicit opinions of the readers such as the two-page post concept. Something like that could add a fun, interactive quality to such a grand piece of personal work. :)
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Someone told me. If that doesn't show up I'll point ya to the journal.
The middle number is where you include the number of the submission, like in the URL.
Put that ID number where the other - signs are. You know the order they turn up in. :3
If you don't have the next page, like the latest one won't have, keep that - sign in there and there won't be a link for it. :3
Someone told me. If that doesn't show up I'll point ya to the journal.
The middle number is where you include the number of the submission, like in the URL.
Put that ID number where the other - signs are. You know the order they turn up in. :3
If you don't have the next page, like the latest one won't have, keep that - sign in there and there won't be a link for it. :3
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