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This...passage, story, whatever you want to call it...is what I would refer to as experimental writing. I wrote this using a free-flow writing technique, meaning I just sat down and wrote what came to mind. The end result was disturbingly personal, but I think it serves its purpose perfectly, so I'm posting it anyway. Something for you to think on. I would love any comments and/or criticism. Thanks!
Category Story / Human
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File Size 9 kB
YES!!! THIS ONE!!!
This one Has to be my favorite of the ones you have wrote so far...
The flow is wonderful...Just like a ramp...Slowly raising the interest level, and drawing you in, further and further:3
Wonderful...
One thing and only one thing...
This might not make any sense, but you could make better by taking off the first line
"its been awhile"
The second line, is a perfect starter for something like this:3
This one Has to be my favorite of the ones you have wrote so far...
The flow is wonderful...Just like a ramp...Slowly raising the interest level, and drawing you in, further and further:3
Wonderful...
One thing and only one thing...
This might not make any sense, but you could make better by taking off the first line
"its been awhile"
The second line, is a perfect starter for something like this:3
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