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IS THIS A BAIT?!
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*edit: The dialogue on scene 7 is a mistake. that scene is supposed be empty dialogue and only portraying gothitelle as breathing as if she's preparing for a plan.
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IS THIS A BAIT?!
7 more pages.
*edit: The dialogue on scene 7 is a mistake. that scene is supposed be empty dialogue and only portraying gothitelle as breathing as if she's preparing for a plan.
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well crap, i guess the "i just never imagined that this is how i'll be telling it to you..you're disgusting. " line never debunked that as i was hoping for. Yknow the line before that was " i was going to tell you this..But you're as disgusting as ever"..The original line is Nothing, that scene is supposed to be empty dialogue, and just a giant pause..... Ahh FUCK yknow what, fuck it. Fuck this shit*Edits the pic*.
Dude, don't feel like you need to edit anything because of anyone. Just because I'm not getting the desired feeling/reaction/empathy/etc. out of it doesn't mean I doubt you've put your thought into it. I'm sure you have your reasoning behind this and that direction the argument and the plot in general are going, and I respect that.
It's just getting exceedingly difficult for me to follow all the intricacies of the story, and I'm getting a veeery strong drama vibe from this - of course, this is supposed to be drama. Love triangles 'n' shit. It's just that I've had too much truly dumbfounding drama going on in my life, especially as of recently, and am quite sick of it. The turn this comic has taken is reminding me uncomfortably of it. But see, that's personal opinions and emotions, and shouldn't dissuade you from the way you've decided to do things. Nor is it supposed to. My first comment was frustration over me not enjoying this part of the comic as much as I could've under different circumstances. That's it. It's not even a "Get back to the fucking" kind of feeling. God knows I love porn with plot. But I think the current scene has been treading in a circle - possibly because of language barriers or whatnot; I don't know and frankly don't care.
Unnecessarily long story short: You do you.
Also sorry for any potential grammar or spelling mistakes. Sending overly long FA comments from a phone is a bitch of a mistake.
It's just getting exceedingly difficult for me to follow all the intricacies of the story, and I'm getting a veeery strong drama vibe from this - of course, this is supposed to be drama. Love triangles 'n' shit. It's just that I've had too much truly dumbfounding drama going on in my life, especially as of recently, and am quite sick of it. The turn this comic has taken is reminding me uncomfortably of it. But see, that's personal opinions and emotions, and shouldn't dissuade you from the way you've decided to do things. Nor is it supposed to. My first comment was frustration over me not enjoying this part of the comic as much as I could've under different circumstances. That's it. It's not even a "Get back to the fucking" kind of feeling. God knows I love porn with plot. But I think the current scene has been treading in a circle - possibly because of language barriers or whatnot; I don't know and frankly don't care.
Unnecessarily long story short: You do you.
Also sorry for any potential grammar or spelling mistakes. Sending overly long FA comments from a phone is a bitch of a mistake.
Oh sorry man, i didn't took you for that. But yea, your thought kinda made me think about Gothitelle's dialogue, so i had to rethink about it until i decide if it should really be there. And i've decided that it will stay the same. Storytelling's sometimes a bitch.
And sorry for your circumstances. This comic of mine will turn around in a fun way later, i hope it gives you a bit of something.
And sorry for your circumstances. This comic of mine will turn around in a fun way later, i hope it gives you a bit of something.
Would I still be here if it didn't?
Joking aside though, much respect for bringing this comic as far as you did in the first place. It's longer than what I ever accomplished. That, and your art style really is something. Lineart, colouring, shading - especially shading. Looking at your art is just a delight.
Joking aside though, much respect for bringing this comic as far as you did in the first place. It's longer than what I ever accomplished. That, and your art style really is something. Lineart, colouring, shading - especially shading. Looking at your art is just a delight.
This strikes me as a foil, I'm skeptical that she actually does know, and I'm even more skeptical that the Gardevoir is waiting. I guess my theory of her loving him is out the window now, but I think she's playing a Trump card, grasping at sticks just to try and make another point. I still am not against her though, Gallade, to me, is being indignant and self righteous. He refuses to see any wrong in his demands and actions, while Prim and Goth have been bearing the guilt of theirs for a while now. Such drama...great writing.
I mean, neither Prim nor Goth seem to be guilty about anything they've done to this Gallade. He spent years being brainwashed back-to-back with his life falling apart, and the first thing they do when he's finally free is tell him it's all his fault for being terrible, despite what they were actually using the brainwashing for, Prim being able to fuck random dudes while Gallade thinks she's a Kirlia who is also his daughter? And we still don't actually know what really happened to his trainer.
Those arrows mean 1 of 2 things Ploxy, either I got lucky and hit the nail on the head. Or...I'm way off base in my prediction and playing right into your hands when it comes to the unfolding drama. :)
Only time will tell, but I also genuinely hope you're having fun mindfucking the lot of us at the moment?
Only time will tell, but I also genuinely hope you're having fun mindfucking the lot of us at the moment?
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