Though the other version has a neat artsy style, I like this version better. I find it clearer when trying to see the expressions and stuff.

Like the way this one came out easier to see then the other one. The other was to light for my eyes, I know i am mostly blind in one eye but the way it looked was more blurry where this one with the hard color comes more clear. It looks good. Kinda feel bad for rev, His poor ears... " These ears are not just for show you know!" is something my little imp says alot when people are shouting lol. I might need to steal that quote of " these ears can hear into tommarrow " if you don't mind lol

Very nice :)

RUDE! But hey, I love ya man : 3

Id say combine both sytles but its all fun

While the no lines style has a really neat artistic look to it and would certainly be appropriate for say, a card or poster or something, the lines give the piece a lot more definition, especially with faces and such.

This style looks better.

I can see cases where the line-less style could be really artsy and neat, but I think some things (not necessarily everything) kinda needs the lines to help them pop better. In some cases the lines help to define some of the objects more clearly such as when the hair is in the characters faces, mouths, some kinds of facial expressions and similar things. it also helps "pop" the character off the background as well.


If you want a good example take your first panel from this version and the other version lay them one behind the other and flash between them and you can kinda see which details disappear or blend into each other. To me in the line-less version the distinct nose disappears and the mouth looks kinda strange as well as the hand is far less distinct on Reva. these issue are less noticeable on the female character due to coloring differences and maybe head position (not really sure but i am gonna go with that as my excuse). If you try the same thing with the third panel you may notice some other things that become less distinct.

On the other hand i like how the on the line-less version it softens the impact of the shirt and the diaper a bit and how it softens the color changes in both of the characters fur.


maybe you might try a "hybrid" of two styles to see which lines can go away and which ones help to define the scene better. the other possibility is maybe to make the lines thinner (if you can even do that without it being a total pain which is probably a no)

just my wooden nickel's worth of thought.


P.S. have always enjoyed your art just never really said anything so i think now is as good a time as any to say thanks for letting us look at your awesome work.

Again great work. :)

Sweet mini comic <3
And I bet baby powder and sunflowers smell pretty nice :P

yes to lines!

Love your art

Oh those poor fennecears.

Nice comic and she is CUTE. He has CUTE ears and both are adorable.

Yes.

smelling is better then licking, and touching XD

i liked the other one, but i think that it looks much better with lines in my opinion

Love this one the best

And now a version with the same vibrant colours, but without lines, please x3

this one has more clarity while the other one doesn't have the dark lines to solidify what we're seeing. Good concept, but if you were to go with the other style, I think something needs to ground the characters or whatever we need to see first.

You could try a mixture of both where your lines in this one are color coded except for the outlines which will be black! Or even a mixture of vibrant and neutral colors.

I personally like this one because I love vibrant colors and easy to read. Good work <3 Very cute.

If you can hear into tomorrow, why didn't you see that coming? HAH

I'm sure you've gotten lots of input on this so far, but I think that the lifework works better with your style most of the time. That being said, the lineless version would work very well with a children's book's illustrations.

Right!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8E6e3gosGmY

Ruuu~ude!
(meant to be at least 3 syllables long)

Don't smell me XD I'm betting it's hard not to.