First thoughts: "Needs something to the right of the rose to visually balance the green swoop on the left. It looks Art Deco, but the letters aren't Art-Deco-y enough, a bit more frills or outline versions of them."

Second thoughts: "Peggy is a much better artist and designer, why bother saying anything."

Third thoughts: "Say something to record at least you looked and thought about it."

Peggy was thinking much the same thing about the green swoopy bit, and thought she could get away with it. Thanks for letting me know I can't. :) Everyone gets lazy sometimes!

(I got rid of that swoop and tweaked some other things.)

Are the old pages hosted anywhere? I wouldn't mind a re-read..

http://egypt.urnash.com/5glasses/chapter/1/