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Wrote this one right after the last one. Turns out depression is an inspiration for me. This one's a bit on the morbid side but it's short so bear with it.
Category Poetry / All
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WOAH! D:
This is REALLY short, but....WOW...that's some SERIOUS description for only SEVEN lines! (o.o)
You have unDOUBTEDLY depicted "suffocation" in the most PERFECT manner (and suffocation in itself can be BRIEF...sometimes...)! =O
I KID you NOT! (O.O)
The use of the word "sanguine" was a NICE touch, but "Harmony achieved through fear"?
Now THAT'S a line, and there's even TRUTH to it!! \(^o^)/
I really felt this one Isis. =/
It would be UNETHICAL to say "get depressed more to write like this," but DAMN...if you can write like this on a normal basis with earnest, intact feelings... (-_-)
This is REALLY short, but....WOW...that's some SERIOUS description for only SEVEN lines! (o.o)
You have unDOUBTEDLY depicted "suffocation" in the most PERFECT manner (and suffocation in itself can be BRIEF...sometimes...)! =O
I KID you NOT! (O.O)
The use of the word "sanguine" was a NICE touch, but "Harmony achieved through fear"?
Now THAT'S a line, and there's even TRUTH to it!! \(^o^)/
I really felt this one Isis. =/
It would be UNETHICAL to say "get depressed more to write like this," but DAMN...if you can write like this on a normal basis with earnest, intact feelings... (-_-)
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