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Thurs Prompt- On Stage: Starring Charles as The Grump pt 1
The story of an aged poor veteran who's been casted for a part in a play and he's never acted before.
Read over and edited, in one of my strongest attempts to make the story easy enough to follow for you dear reader. I understand the accent's and the wording are going to be hard to follow, but I needed it to get the kind of feel I wanted out of the character. I haven't even started part two and am unsure if I'll ever get around to it. I hope you enjoy though reader. Feel free to comment or critique as you like.
Read over and edited, in one of my strongest attempts to make the story easy enough to follow for you dear reader. I understand the accent's and the wording are going to be hard to follow, but I needed it to get the kind of feel I wanted out of the character. I haven't even started part two and am unsure if I'll ever get around to it. I hope you enjoy though reader. Feel free to comment or critique as you like.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 79px
File Size 11.9 kB
Liked the dialect. Really liked it. I always found them interesting, as I am non-native myself. I speak horribly. Yeah... well... nothing much to say, the story is rather entertaining, amusing, quite brilliant at places... The dialog is very lively, I liked those parts. Yup. That's that. I'm trying to catch past TP responses I have missed and I'm quite dizzy, so sorry for the poor feedback. But I liked this! Yeah... Good work.
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